I just created a story, which I entered into the Tender Rose Writing Contest. Please read it, give me feedback, and how I can improve structure and character development!

Thank you!

Tender Rose Writing Contest

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/837292/tender-rose-writing-contest-accepting-entries-contest-writing-competition-writingcontest-prizes-storycontest-karmaprizes

My Famliy's Boyfriend

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1033965/my-family-s-boyfriend-tenderrose

Long Haul/Exodus

Start Date: 10/21/15

Length: Not sure yet

status: In progress

Not in other competitions