looks kinda scary..
but yeah,its good to describe a story..
cant wait :)

i like it like it like it yeah! lol :D

it's good..
she really looks like she was suffering because 'she let go'
haha.. nyc choice of picture.. i think it will really reflect the girl in your upcoming story.. :))

goodluck :D

It’s not bad..
Actually good :)))

Thank you for your opinion..^^ I'll try to improve it just like what you said... Thank you very much for the help!!

It's not bad!! ^^ Maybe, if you put the first "Like a LEAF" more in the top left corner, and the "I LET GO" a tiny bit up (or the back face down?) and to the right... Just personal opinion. It's really, really, not bad at all though. That part just seems, I don't know. Otherwise, it's really pretty. ^^ If you don't like my opinion, feel free to ignore it. It's not even that big of an adjustment, so whatever... ^^ Good luck with it~