Help me !!!! :((
I had write a few stories but almost all of them LACK of feedback. Just a few stories which is success
I don't know why, I think my story isn't that bad but why people rare to gimme comment :(
It's make me lazy to update. I need a feedback so I will know wheter my story is good or not, from the feedbacks I can improve my skills to write
If you kind enough, can you check my story ?
I'm focusing on this story first, can you help me ? I'm not force you to read this, but I just need help how is my story going when a reader read it.
Just it :(
Help me juseyooo.......~~
(just click on the pic to direct the story)
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