Remember Me: I. The One Who Remembers

Actually, this story is a very old story of mine, written when I was still on 8th grade. Now that I'm addicted to nyongtory, I felt the urge to write a story too. I looked for a story to recycle and I found this.

 

This is a very dramatic story where two lovers are always challenged.

 

I chose Jiyong to be the one chasing Seungri because from their latest concerts... he has been... *ehem* flirting *ehem* with Seungri. At least that's how I see it. And Seungri is this hard-to-get character, because... *ehem* when GD tries to kiss him, he avoids *ehem*

 

Anyways. Why did I choose Seungri to suffer after 5 years? This is how I see the maknae's loyalty to GD. Even if Jiyong (in my story) forgot him, Seungri (in my story) didn't give up and still went to Jiyong's house every single day.

 

This chapter is Seungri's point of view. I really like how I put the story, like from present then flashback then present again the flashback again. But I'm not really sure if I portrayed the feelings and emotions right. As what my friend said, I am emotionless so when I write a story, I tend to make it without any emotions.

 

I hope I did a great job with the first chapter of my first fanfic.

 

MORE FANFICS TO COME!

 

-Rina

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eudoramp
#1
I laughed out lout when you said you're emotionless. Come on, no one is emotionless. We all have emotions. It's just sometimes we're not good at explaining or showing it.
If you write a story, I'll be your number one fans and help you through with your story! So fighting!!><♥