Fic Feedback - Naruto Fans Only Please

Okay so I've recently been inspired to make an ItaDei, NaruSasu, NejiGaara story and I've started and RESTARTED and written a bunch of different starters but because I'm the one writing it I think it's crap. It would be nice to have someone who isn't biased look at what I've written so far and tell me what they think. If you're interested PLEASEleave a comment below and I shall pm you what I have so far

THANK you~

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YeojaUiMongsang #1 May 6, 2016 12:45:04

Bruh...you ship Neji and Gaara?! Yo, that's like one of my favorite side ships that I love. Epic~

GRiMoiRe_HEaRt #2 May 1, 2015 12:25:10

OMG~ YOU SHOULD WRITE ITASASU ~ can I read it please~~~

Renia_ #3 May 1, 2015 10:53:07

Oh god i Love Naruto I have all the mangas an the dvds I would love to read your fic about them

Pluviophilerose #4 May 1, 2015 10:47:57

I'd be happy to read it, I'm a huge Naruto fan and a big shipper of NaruSasu but haven't found any good ones as of late so I'd definitely read it once finished ^^