The first one's a little too crowded... Maybe remove a few pictures here and there to improve the picture? For example, the roses seem a bit redundant. First off, there are already three roses. I'm sure they mean something altogether but maybe, if you were going for three roses, don't separate them? Like, just get a picture of three roses together or put them in corners or something? Also, I've read somewhere that you should limit your characters (the people) to 3 or 4 to make the poster seem less crowded. If the poster is supposed to be dramatic, make Kyungsoo, Chanyeol and the girl in black the main pictures. It'd be nicer if they were all in black. Then, a huge antique clock in the background and three roses surrounding them. Then the rest of the poster left in black. Or put one chandelier at the tippy top. Just one. The staircase... I don't know.
When a poster's too crowded, it looks too disorganized and people will find a hard time grasping the message you're trying to give (if ever there is any). Like a disoriented room you're supposed to clean, you don't exactly know where to start. Sometimes, it's best if the poster is simple and neat. But even that's hard to do.
I'm not sure about the message of the first one, but the second one is much better. It's clear the poster is about fairytales and stuff.
P.S. I'm not a graphic artist, though, so I don't know what I'm talking about...unfortunately. :-( I've tried so many times to create a good poster but I just end up making up designs in my head. I never make anything good with my hands so the computer just ends up blank. OTL I give up.
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