Chapter 1: cuteness overload!!!!! they are so adorable!!! The two youngest as troublemakers and the 2 oldest are good kid~ Taohun is loving parents and love how cute they are especially towards their kids's love relationship, but I feel sad, bittersweet, seeing the kids going to their new house/place to start a family :'))

Chapter 1: Okay even though Yixing is my bias, if he wasn't i would still die over the cuteness of him in this fic! But all of them are adorable too ahh and Taohun are sooooo loving *sigh*

Chapter 2: I died cuz of cuteness overload ❤

Chapter 1: Searching for ChanSoo fics... But I found this one. I've to say that it is my 1st time reading TaoHun fic. Absolutely funny and well written. I fell in love with this story <333

Chapter 1: Finally finished reading your one-shot! Yay~ :)
So first of all, I wanted to talk about the great cute moments of your story, in my opinion, you managed to show the cute fluffy moments of having pups in this story and I guess that’s the main point in this serious of one-shots, right? They are like FWP! :/ I don’t know if I made the word by myself or it actually existed before! xD It’s the short form of fluff without a plot! (lol just popped into my head from PWP!) lmao
There was this problem that caught my attention while reading your story, I recommend you to leave a horizontal line between paragraphs from different time periods so that readers won’t be shocked when the story jumps from one-time zone to the next one! And also, some things were so rushed or just surprising to me, especially the ending, or when Kyungsoo got pregnant and all things about their (pups’) mating! I know it was just a one-shot but the pace of the beginning wasn’t the same with the pace of the ending!
There were also very minor and small grammatical/spelling errors that are mostly from careless editing! So, a proof read would be awesome for this story!
But honestly, I laughed way too hard at the part in which Kyungsoo started shifting! xD and omg Jongin called him a thing! xD Haha that was so cute, your story was so cute and fluffy in general, I really liked it! >~<

asdfghjkl so freaking ready! :D *rushed to the first chapter*

Chapter 1: Omg this was so freakn cute >w</ aww YAS loved it!

Chapter 3: I love this story.. So cute and fluffy.. Write more, author-nim :)