Chapter 1: Wow....this was so...beautiful?..Interesting? ....I can't find the exact word for it but it was beautiful and...idk, your writing always gives off this really beautiful vibe, even when the story isn't a particularly happy one. Once again, great job! I'm off to read more from you! <3
Chapter 1: Ack. Why the feels??? This reminds me of some 9gag post I saw ages ago... it had a heart smith though and they had their physical hearts out aswell... Gosh is it okay if I ask a continuation? It's so beautiful and I've been thinking about this plot for daejae for ages! Like waiting for somebody who'd actually write it, even though I knew the odds were of 0.0000001% even going as far as trying to write it myself.. but I don't have time since I'm usually busy and I don't want to leave another fic hanging (since I already have like a bajillion of them) and I don't really have any talent in expressing a beautiful plot cause my engrish is so bad... so yeah.. but Eff that- *throws confetti* HERE IT IS!! SOMEONE ACTUALLY WROTE IT *tumbles off the roof* GAWD IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL ;^; AND FEELZY AND I JUST CAN'T EXPLAIN (see wut I mean about having a hard time expressing things?) ;^; Either way, I'm sure you're preoccupied yourself so ain't no way I'm forcing you.. I'm just making an incy wincy tiny wish... can you perhaps continue it? It's okay if you refuse- I mean it's already beautiful as is but I can't help but ask for a bit more huhuhuhu Feelz can do a lot to me, okay? *begs on knees* I wanna know more about Dae and why he wasn't given a heart in return and I just wanna see how daejae goes.. but yeah... it's all up to you
Chapter 1: This is so beautiful. I love how you made hearts literal, a thing that people actually exchange. It's a kind of confusing prospect at times, but i really really like it like that. it's so sad that youngjad had to resort to locking his away, and that daehyun was never returned a heart, especially since youngjae assumed that his must be perfect ; ;
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