The Sea

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jr/jb mermaid!fic

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red_kpop97
#1
Chapter 1: Wow, merman au!

So Jinyoung called Jaebum with the shell with intention to kill him?
What about the nightmare? Some kind of warning or side effects from the 'spell' Jinyoung do?
I have so much questions but ugh, the ending shocked me so much I forgot the questions.

I wonder what would happened if Jaebum didn't tell the aquarium owner about the slime. Would that change a thing?
Jaebum is so dense for not knowing even though there's pearls everywhere.
I'm glad it's not usual mermaid thing that the mermaid turn into foam or anything, but I'm sad Jaebum had to die (T_T)

Could I cry, because why the hell JJ couple is so angsty everywhere?
It's really beautiful and touching, all the emotions get relayed so well.
I hope you would write another beautiful fics like this again in the near future. Until then~ (^w^)/
tootoothree #2
Chapter 1: This. is. so. BEE-YOO-TI-FUL!!! ;A; The melancholic tone, mermaid tears, the ending, everything! Its sad but I can only imagine that Jinyoung would be unhappy either way? Imo this was really well written. I enjoyed it, heartbreaking though it was. ^^
psycho_d
#3
Chapter 1: I cried ! Damnnn idk why but i ing cry TT____TT
OMG, they still cant be together at last :'(
poor my precious OTP :'(
This story is beautiful although its heartbreaking... i love it ♡
keep writinv more story about them.. i swear i gonna read it...
HinanDyan #4
Chapter 1: How beautiful... How could you write such a story like this? The way you tell us is so pretty~ like it!!!^^
Btw, i'm a bit confused in the end, is jinyoung make it both of them dead in the end or jinyoung is the one that turn into something? But overall i really love your idea for jjp like this :)