THANKS FOR THE HUNT
by lil-lionboy-tae

» Story Title [3/5]

It is okay, I guess. To be honest, the first time I saw the title; it didn’t give a vibe or anything. It’s quite simple and kind of straightforward. In my opinion, it sounds like nothing special at all. And I was planning to give you a lower mark for this (sorry xD). But as I went through my reading, you’d proved me wrong, girl. I think it somehow suits the story. I can’t really explain how or why, I just think it fits. And since you only have one chapter up for now, I can’t say much about it.

You should know though, that readers tend to read stories with good titles. I’m not saying that yours is not good enough. As I’ve said before, it suits the story and I like it. But it only happened after I’ve got to read it. I would like to suggest you to change it to something more eye-catching, but at the same time, I’ve already liked it. However, it is still up to you anyway.
 

» Description/Foreword [8/10]

First impression is important, everyone knows this. I don’t really like your foreword, but that doesn’t mean I hate it. I just think it will be better if you keep things short. Some people want it that way, but some prefer longer description. So, again, it completely depends on you. Nevertheless, I love the mysterious vibe it gives. There are many questions in my head and they remain unclear until I’ve finished reading the foreword (and even after I’m done with the first chapter). It is exciting and it makes my curiosity goes wild. So, it is good!
 

» Appearance [4/5]

I absolutely loved that poster! It does fit the story and its genres. And sure, it’s very pretty too. The font used, however, is too small for my liking. The color used is also light and it makes my eyes hurt. But since you’re using layout, it can be comprehended. Personally, I’m not fond to layouts – too much works to do. And I don’t like having it when reading stories because it annoys me. It’s just me, though. And this is personal opinion. Don’t take it to heart, please.
 

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