Chapter 1: this was really beautiful <3

This is so beautiful and heart-warming and stomach-churning. :') I really really liked this, and I love the whole idea of a love beginning in a train cart. This was just wonderful to read. ♥

Being the obnoxious spammer I am I am commenting again because I have diagnosed myself with insomnia and am therefore bored out of my mind. I really like your diction.

Being the irrationally biased fangirl I am, the one time SungYeol's name came up is my favorite sentence between both stories.

Wow. Love it. This is just as good as the first. You're one amazing author, aren't you? ;)

ohh wow. what do you mean this is not on par, this is beautiful (:<br />
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By far one of the most believable sad scenes I've read so far ;~~~~~~~; I had to resist the intention to whack 'me' (lol) on the head for being drastic enough to break up with Gyu :/ And also whack Gyu for being so nasty to the members... ahem... what crazy people do in the name of love, sigh. I love how the ending correlates to the earlier fic! (P.S. I love the first one more too but that's just because that was flawfree and happy and goooorgeous <3) I'd have liked to see how they would have responded to each other after 4 months though XD<br />
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Thank you for the great reads!

I cried a few times, reading through it. But the emotions and giddiness I felt at the end when they finally saw each other again. It made me smile like such an idiot.

This is really really good and just heartwarming. It had me smiling like an idiot in computer class ^^

awwwwwwweeeeee not only is this cute this is so real. the first one was amazing as well. this doesn't have the usual fanfiction cute, but more of a believable cute. it's written beautifully :)

I am on a fluffy white cloud floating through space to a melody of birds chirping while it rains chocolate and cotton candy. Seriously, this is so freaking adorable OTL it's like singles awareness day all over again except this time I mind a little less because SungGyu deserves to be happy dude wtf who am I kidding it BURNS ;~;<br />
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And I love how you didn't write the part where they did the whole awkward "oh hi my ex who I just spent the last four months of my life longing for so badly my friend's had to physically crash me into you" thing, but just skipped from first glance to trip back because they're just naturally perfect for each other and you don't have to explain it xD<br />
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This was a random detail, but I can just imagine some old Korean guy with white hair slicked back in a gray suit and navy tie behind a giant expensive burgundy desk and the look of absolute horror on his face when whatsherface (I am bad with names OTL) asks him to read her mom's entire will out loud again xD If someone did that to me I'd fax them a copy and tell them to leave xD <br />
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And I love the whole scenario in the beginning where SungYeol OTL I FAIL WHY WHY WHY SungGyu is imagining bringing her home and his mom doting on her and her being all diffident and bashful and I want to squish his nonexistent chipmunk cheeks for being so cute and unattainable and adorable despite the fact this is fictional and in reality his thoughts aren't really this sweet.<br />
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Long comment is <em>looooooong</em>, and I will stop polluting you perfect story with my not so perfect comment writing (they need to teach that in English wtf will knowing what pathos and independent clauses help me with). <br />
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(I may or may not be high on nutella)