Chapter 1: I love you. I just wow. I'll never, ever get tired of your stories. Ever. Every single one is perfection and I just nope dkfksldkd you make my little ontae shipping heart happy danke danke
Chapter 1: “Lace underneath - give the guy something to remember.”….“pick your jaw off the floor” XD …..I don’t think Jinki will be forgetting them any time soon Taemin ;)
aww keke I love him talking to undies and !
The ending line was DAEKBAK!!!!
The way you write brings life to the characters and the stories. OnTae’s personalities and conversations/interactions are perfect and so believable: Realistic relationship. I love that!
Chapter 1: UHG I seriously can't with your stories!!! Taem has so much sass and confidence. I love when tae is confident. It's different than the shy uke that he is usually portrayed as. Jinki you dumb dumb locking their bikes together. XD I wasn't expecting tae to dress as a girl for dinner but I'm sure Jinki hella liked it! <3 and LOL at Jinki being a dork talking to the XD their characters compliment each other so well in this story. And alafkjsflajgs of course I loved your awesome ending! Jinki, you need to wash his mouth out with soap! XD
Chapter 1: Perfect. There were SO MANY details about this piece that I loved. The way you described Taemin enjoying his books as if he were traveling through time evoked a whimsical tone. Taemin's attire for the date had me doing a double take (with delighted squeals^^). It was so unexpected but, it was also crucial to the transition into the deliciously naughty evening. Their playful banter kept the mood light but, it still had that tense heat that I adore so much about your writing. I can see this being a go-to to help ease the OnTae fic drought from time to time^^
Chapter 1: Guh, I hope this is more than a one shot. I love the snarkiness and Taemin's potty mouth. Fun and hot is not something you come across every day.
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