And the feeling is growing

Twins Attack! (SEMI-HIATUS UNTIL THE END OF APRIL DUE TO FINAL EXAM)

NO ONE POV.

 

 

You, Yong Chae Mi an ordinary !6 years old school girs in Seoul Art High School is not so popular but have quite a lot good friends, she's good at singing, and piano and also speaking in fluent English, eventough her parents is Korean.

"Chae Mi, honey wake up..."  Her mom called her for school, she's awake right away and go to bathroom, take a bath and change into her uniform. "Hmm, what's for breakfast mom? it's smell's good yumyummm.." She praised her mother with her pretty smile plastered on her face "Oh this is your favorite pancake, did you wanna eat now or bring it to the school?" Her mom ask her while she's tied her shoes string "I guess it's better to bring it, I won't be late in my first day of school hehe" then she kiss her mom goodbye

 

AT SEOUL ART HIGH SCHOOL

 

"OHMYGOD!! THAT'S THE TWINS kyaaaa~"

"Oppa~ come'on go out with me..."

"Someone give me a tissue, nosebleed here!"

All the Girls in the hallway is screaming and squealing when they see this adorable yet charming twins walking on the hallway "Oh please, not again, one two three... RUN!" Youngmin and Kwangmin running along the hallway without looking back

Suddenly they are hit something, or someone? "Ouchh... my head aww..." She fall at her and  hold her head with her hands "oh, I'm sorry Chae-Chae Mi right? Here I help you" Kwangmin reach out his hand and pulling her from the ground.

"Are you okay? forgive us to hit you, there's a lot of crazy girls haunted us there, hehe" Youngmin said jokingly while he rubbed his neck.

"Naah, it's okay, I didn't see you too, thanks and see you later" Chae Mi said and smiling to the twins and leave them both in the hallway.

"You know what am I thinking right, Kwangmin?" Youngmin grinning like an idiot and nudged his twin.

"Yeah, she's interesting, so pretty..." Kwangmin said and they left the hallway.

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Wihiw the first chapter is done, how is it? Pathetic? Horrible? or ?
Lemme know what you think guys, please comment and subscribe, LOTTA LOVE!
Bbyong~

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matsu-hyung #1
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hehe, there you go. :) I'll keep reading, don't you worry. :)
adelkodel96 #2
Matsu: aaaaah thankyouthankyou well maybe I'll make kwangmin a lil bit unluckh, but just see what's coming after that hohoho keep reading even if my fanfic is such a mess hehehe
matsu-hyung #3
Aw~ saranghaeyo too~! Nice update, we see Niel~! So cool~! Funny, I wonder how Niel will get along with the Boyfriend characters and POOR POOR POOR Kwangmin for missing his hug. huhuhu~ But oh well, better lucky next time. *he should've gone for it* and that's okay, the story is cute so keep trying~! I'll always wait for an update. :)
matsu-hyung #4
Haha love you too~ I loved this chapter. The jealousy that's going on is too adorable. Haha youngmin acts like me and my inside monologue. I say things like that in my head when I talk to the person I like. I wonder if chaemi can tell that they like her. ??? But yup that minwoo picture is super cute!!! <3
adelkodel96 #5
@matsukenninol : ohh god thnkyou so much for your comment it really makes me feel so good in writing hihi but my english just horrible urgh well it is i used a lot of my money to fix this piece of junk, but it still broke urrgh thnks again for your appreciation luvyaaaaa!
@poppy : well just pray for my computer hihi
@atira : hey babeeee dyou like my story???
matsu-hyung #6
hahaha i feel like i laugh a lot when I read this. :) The chappies are funny and cute. NOW IT'S YOUNGMIN'S TURN TO STEAL CHAE MI ehehehhehe~!~!~!~!~! I like this fic. you're doing a nice job so far. I wonder if she'll end up choosing one of the twins sometime. But it seems like she doesn't care too much about hanging out with the popular hot guys. I wonder if she had any friends before them??? Hmmm. Good story though, fellow author. :) Good luck with the rest of this. I won't fail to comment when you update. ^_^ (P.S: I told you I read fast. kekekeke)
matsu-hyung #7
hahaha they are too cute in that picture. and i love this chappie with minwoo~! cute history together (WooWoo is adorable nickname) ^_^ and wow, i guess even hot guys get nervous kekeke jk jk but kwangmin's voice was shaking. he's taking advantage of the fact that youngmin isn't there. No~ selfish twin, SHARE~~~ haha i like this fic so far. I'm going to keep reading. :) (and that's too bad about your computer with the virus. My laptop totally died because of a virus one time and it costed too much to fix so it sits there without having any use to it. -_______________- )
matsu-hyung #8
Okay, excuse me but i read super fast but i love commenting and making the authors feel extra special so i'm on chappie three and haha i feel sort of bad for the twins to be competing over just one girl. -___- *i'm here~!* jk jk but yeah, youngmin can already tell that kwangmin likes her. And i love the title by the way, it was cute and a good use of the song hehe (i hope they DO get to SHARE her ehehhehehe)
matsu-hyung #9
I like the first chappie hehe (yes, i just had to come and check out my readers stories) and so kwangmin and youngmin are HOT~! of course they would be chased after in school. :) Silly boys. haha but lucky girl. Just touching their hand would have me idk, fainting haha and she sort of just kept walking like nothing. xD
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