BURN

Description

 

Something has been nagging on my mind lately and I just knew that I have to write it out and keep it off my chest.So many things going around lately,and been asked too, quite often, this last few days,about input and yes words of advice and somehow,it is ironic to be asked for such an issue.

When do you give up?When do you say it is over? They say in a relationship,it takes two to tango and it quite difficult and weird when you are the only one dancing in the music.What do you do when the other half says it is over and you are caught unaware?Somehow ending one is quite difficult and yes quite heart wrenching but beginning a new one is even harder.How do you start a new one when you barely left the old one and the remnants are still there ???

I am just thinking of a one shot story and just to get it off my chest.....then maybe I will feel better after this....

Foreword

 

They have loved each other,build their dreams together.She thought that both of them can weathered the storms,the seperations,the struggles ,the temptations.But what she didn't know that the man she loved who was the mirror of strenght and principles ,will the first to break away.Will she hold on to the one that is dearest and to the one that means a whole world to her or just give up and walk away?When do you say,this is it and it is over?Did she reach the cross road i her life and she must choose the path to take.....

He was a man torn.He thought he was strong but then only to realized that he is weak like all the others.His conscience is saying something else but his heart is saying someone  else.His mind over his heart,or his heart over his mind?

She just met him,but why is it that when she look at him, she can feel this ecstasy that she has never felt before.Is it  wrong to seek him out even if you know that there is commitment somewhere and the girl in question is somebody that is totally not a stranger to you.? When did loving someone can be a mistake and when do you give up from something that you really want in life?

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summer-star
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Visiting old fics!
summer-star
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keyforu #3
Chapter 1: i like how you made this!.
shinyway #4
Chapter 1: wow! it is nice and nice1