These Hearts Are Blinded By Darkness

Description

Suho speaks in a soft tone, calling Jongdae for dinner. He sits up, nodding blankly at Suho's words while staring off at the window.

Foreword

One little short story written for my baby Jongdae - I don't even know why I'm torturing - not literally, of course, I can't stand seeing him hurt - him in this fanfic. New writer here though, would love to hear your feedbacks~

Was written for my english assignment haha, no one actually noticed it was a fanfic :)

Warnings : psychological stuff, really deep dark stuff - because I'm a weird kid haha, dystopian era, subtle(?) character death

Leaving the ending to you guys, who knows? Maybe you can guess the ending I had in mind..

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fresh-salad #1
Chapter 1: wow! I really like an unexpected endng you've presented, also the plot, and point of view from Jongdae.
cray2gurl4eva #2
Chapter 1: This, was sad, yet satisfying, mental to the point where it's actually a beautiful artwork. I'll treasure this story, author, thank you so much, it helps, knowing that there are people who are suffering, that there are many others. I guess my opinion is a sickening thing, nonetheless I love your work ^-^
tendaerlove #3
Chapter 1: aw it's so sad.
but you write really well, I bet your teacher appreciated it. ^^
you've chosen well to write baekchen for a first story. welcome in the club! (I did the same.) *hugs*

xoxo, bea

PS.: loving your username~
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