Rushing Waves [One-Shot]

Description

"I sat on the beach, my bare toes sinking into the warm sand. The waves came rushing up the beach, the water crashing and splashing against the grains of gold, a force filling them with a deep, dark blue. It sky covered with blots of silver jewels seeped with a liquid ink that began to drip into the world below; the rain it became began to soak the long strands of my hair. As the breeze blew the locks of my hair out of place, strands stuck to the sides of my face as the water took control. I, however, didn't care. I felt like I belonged there. Like it was perfect."

Park Byullie had been waiting so long for to come back to this place. And now that she was there, all she wanted to do was sit on the beach.

Her thoughts wander to the past, thinking of a time when she was trully happy.

Can this happiness ever come back to her?

Foreword

This is a little present for my friend on AFF, AeByul13 to cheer her up ^^

I hope I do a good job ;P

Haii-yaa! FIGHTING!!

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K-pop_lover123 #1
Hey:) nice story
YurisistableDalmates
#2
really good
foreversucks #3
iagree this is great!!
Anonymous_15 #4
GREAT FANFIC~!
NappeunYeoja #5
Such a good storyyyyy xD
rukiblood
#6
REVIEW: Amazing short and sweet story. I really liked it. The description was nice, as if I was the Byullie.<br />
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I think the ring at the end was a little random. If you were to notice the ring in an earlier time in the story, it'd make more sense why you brought it up.<br />
"I never did tell him. That I was leaving. I thought that, maybe, if I had his love we could forget about it and maybe it would disappear."<br />
i wish you would've elaborated more on that part.<br />
Like, leaving where, and stuff like that, just to keep the reader in the loop, so that we could feel more emotion, like saying that she moved away to the U.s and came back or something like that would make me go awww so saaaad.<br />
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"And it was also my decision to come back here, now, after four years." Aww, i liked this line. I wish you would've EMPHASIZED the four years part as well.<br />
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And also, i'm dying to know how old they were and how old they are now =)<br />
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all in all, great piece, as usual. Simple and Clean (utada hikaru hahaa)<br />
I give it a 4.8/5<br />
Good jawbbb!
Accidentally_in_love #7
@kia; I'm so sorry, I'm workingm on gift fics so I can't update those for a while... or won't, hehe. But once I am finished them I will, I promise, update them as soon as I possibly can ^^ x
Kia-Nature-Ra
#8
LUVV that poster! :D<br />
And dedication ;)<br />
Btw, when are u gonna update ur on-going stories?<br />
I'm hwaittinnnggggg~
DarkHybridx
#9
aw, I like the dedication, lol. Oh well, off to read, I'll review after I'm done reading it.
staticdream
#10
Good Job as always Kerry!<br />
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Although...you tend to get carried a way with your descriptions...I know description is a good thing, but like as the rule goes...everything in moderation. I know we all try to go for a more "artistic" and "metaphorical" way of writing, but too much purple prose can come off as cheesy. So just try to find the balance there^^