One Step, One Fall, One Falter

Description

Tao has left EXO and Jongin needs to see Taemin. 

Foreword

Just a little thing I wrote after the news broke about Tao. 

 

 

Please note that the views expressed by the characters in this fic aren't my own. 

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Kookie1234Jungkook
#1
Chapter 1: This story was perfect and amazing. I like it very much. Good work.
Fankirmee
#2
Oh my god, this is gold!! I love the characterisations and the overall mood you portrayed - I'm always a er for SHINee ot5-ness and having Jongin be the sixth person was wonderful. I'm not quite sure whether I would agree on Taemin being emotionally receptive but then again Jongin is one of his best friends so he probably knows him better than others ^^ loved this A LOT!!
ajs787 #3
Chapter 1: I'm currently having a reading spree of your recent works, obviously. And as usual, you are my primary source of SM related news, and let me say, these are not the happiest news, even though I don't follow EXO :(
My heart warmed at the way you portrayed Shinee family throuh Jongin's eyes, and his friendship with Taemin, and all hyungs showing their support to Kai. Makes me wonder how it really differs from band to band, their inside interactions? How can they not develop some kind of collective spirit during their pre-debut and then later in one band, so as to not take to heart each others problems? Or it is not a valid question as you only wrote your own take of both group's dynamics... Idk what I want to say, sorry!
banana_bubbles #4
This is not good for my heart, like ouch. Feels like I got a hard hit to the gut too.
adhipoe #5
Chapter 1: Wow! This is amazing. So many feels right now.
joinmymisery #6
Chapter 1: This was heartbreakingly beautiful
fujoshi100
#7
Chapter 1: This is so sweet! Like the sfeels are drowning me! My heart ached when Tao left, for the fans, myself, and for Tao, but now it's aching for the other members. I never imagined how the other members felt, but now I have and it hurts, but in all the right ways. This is very good, especially for your first Taekai. You should write them more often! Anyway, hope to see with more Taekai!
_pequinessa #8
Chapter 1: What an amazing fic to come across. The whole scenario is absolutely nice, and ughhh the feels. I think you were extremely accurate when writing SHINee's daily life, I can totally see them acting that way. And, I don't know what to say, this fic made my day 'cause it's so heartwarming, and the relationship between Taemin and Jongin is so precious, you shoul consider writing about them more often, I know you'll do great.
TheRudeTasteOfSane
#9
Chapter 1: You're a brilliant author.

This feels so real. My heart breaks for Jongin. :C
kjmuniverse
#10
Chapter 1: Im both a shawol and exo-l hence my 3x of the ls on my username. reading this made me feel a sense of realism compared to other fics, like this is how they act towards each other in different situations and their dorm life. but there will forever be a support system type of bond to the groups. so nice to read! hope you continue.

can anyone or author-nim make a suju/exo version of this? but from a kyuhyun/suho or leeteuk/suho pov?