Chapter 5: omg i just read this and it gave me a headache... i'm still trying to wrap my head around the story.. if it hadn't been for your explanation, i would've still been so confused... nonetheless, it was indeed a minding story and it was really interesting. amazing job, authornim!
Chapter 5: Really great read. I caught on to JongIn having a mental illness pretty early actually, although I can't remember exactly when. What I did not expect was that he was in a hospital this whole time and the scenes were a distortion of reality. Good twist here near the end.
Thanks for sharing.
Absolutely loved this fic. What I love most is that it is written in Jongin's POV and the readers are left confused kind of like the characters in the story. I had a feeling something was up with Jongin like when the scenes would jump around a bit. Overall it's amazing, great job on it!!
Chapter 5: That plot twist was absolutely perfect! At first I was slightly confused with the times where Jongin would have sort of "scenes" per se play out in his mind or when he thought he told Kyungsoo something but then he hadn't next chapter. But when i got to the part where Kyungsoo said Jongin had stuck his head in a paint can it all just hit me. I had to set my phone down and silently scream(lol) but all in all this was a beautifully written fanfic thank you so much and keep up the good work!! < 3
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