Chapter 4: Thank you so so much for reviewing my story! :D
I greatly appreciate all your critiques; I have some concerns at some parts of the story (coughgrammarcough) and you managed to nail it down and now I can see where I can do better.
Again, thanks for the help :)

I've requested ^^
take your time :)

I have requested :3 I don't know if it's too long or something, but please take your time <3 thanks~~

Chapter 3: Haha, the title is supposed to have a muuuuch deeper meaning, hopefully I'll be able to reveal it once xD but I know that it should be two words, I wrote it together on purpose :D As for the mistakes, I'm going to correct them / get a beta, depending on what's easier lol. I'm a bit busy / lazy at the moment, school's coming to an end and I need to study + I usually write late at night while half-asleep so...
Honestly, I get what you mean by how all of them were found, but again, if the story will go on, the reasons will be revealed. The only true paralells I could draw would be between Junmyeon and Kyungsoo AND Sehun and Jongin (but poor Jongin is a very special case :/
Yixing could have easily raised Jongin on his own though, there was no need for them to 'join' the pack in a way, BUT one: Jongin needed company 2.: Yixing had his eyes on..something
I'm actually thinking of two very cruel moves towards Baekyeol, not gonna spoil 'em to you in case you end up reading it, but it won't be pretty if I end up making them. I decided to focus on them just a bit for now xD
Okay, rant is over, thanks for the useful review <33 it is quite helpful :D

I've requested :D

Hello! I've requested a review from your shop, so thank you in advance for your time.
Also, even though my story is complete I do still post chapters after the end for additional little stories which you don't need to review. Just until the end of the main story will be good enough, thank you again~! :)

Chapter 2: Hello! I picked up my review. Don't worry about it being harsh. I'd rather have harsh reviews and a better story than something useless to me. The ending of the story isn't my favorite, and I'll be sure to go back and add more characterization and fix the grammar issues. Thank you very much for your time and I'll be back!

I requested ^^

Hello celestial-xx-kisses~
I've request a review from your shop. Thank you in advanced for your time. :)