Love's gone

Love's gone (English)

 

He woke up because of a hawking.
"I thought your with Joonmyun", commented the person.
Jongdae looked sleepy at him. Confused he furrowed his brows. Minseok pointed in Jongdaes direction with his head.
"You're cuddling with Zitao", he said uninterested.
Jongdae looked in the direction Minseok had pointed and saw Zitao lying beside him, one arm wrapped around Jongdae. Surprised he pushed Zitao rudely away and sledded in the opposite direction causing him to fall off of the bed.
"For gods sake, what the hell are you doing here?", he asked Ziao, who woke up from the sudden movements.
"You said I can come over to you when I feel lonely", Zitao said pouting.
"That doesn't mean you can cuddle on me!", he said flustered.
"You're comfortable", Zitao replied innocently.
"Comfortable or not, I have a boyfriend, you know!", Jongdae said annoyed and rose to his feet. Minseok, who watched the scene amused, shook his head smiling.
"And my love's gone", Zitao said sadly and buried his head in the pillow.

 

The End. 171 words.
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FAKE94 #1
hello. since when are you learning german? is it very hard? becaise i think if i would have to learn it know i wouldnt be able to. it seems so difficult. and ist my native language :DD und Danke :))
ex00dus
#2
Hallo! Ich heisse ex00dus :) (yes i speak a little German but only because I study it in school and it's not very good)
Love your story, keep it up! Du sehr talentiert:)
Danke schon for subscribing to my story! It means a lot <3
Tschus xxx much love, ex00dus xoxo
chrysantslurvletters
#3
Chapter 1: Oh poor zitao...
I think you should watch the apostrophes; the ( ' ) sign and differentiate your and you're..but overall this is a splendid work..
(^-^)¡~ hwaiting!♡♡