Missing Spaces

Description

When Jongin time travels by accident he tries to change things for the better and manages to everything up for himself.

Foreword

Is a crosspost from the taekai fic exchange on livejournal! (read at your own risk it's unbetad and the typos make my head spin, this one is the edited version)

Warnings (Please Read) : Past mentions of character death (Murder, Parents), some violence, and mentions of a

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_haneulee #1
Chapter 1: Wow! I love this so much~
AnUnusualTwist #2
Chapter 1: Awh, the ending was so sweet. I love it! Nice job! <3
taekaitbh #3
Chapter 1: I LOVED THIS
Like, I was just going to bookmark a few taekai fics to read for tomorrow, but I got so curious so i read it now anyway and ohmygod i don't regret it!! AND THE END JUST-
taekai69 #4
Chapter 1: AMAZING !!! PERFECT ♡♡♡
sherleigh #5
hi!

i saw that you didn't have any reviews for this, which is a crime because it's actually really good.

the whole teleportation thing has been done in the taekai fandom before, but your take on it is interesting and new. i liked how you showed the fracturing of taemin and kai's timeline due to kai's intervention in the events of that night.

but more importantly, i thought the way you wrote kai's reaction to the fracturing of the timeline was top class. you could really feel the fear, the way it slowly built up as he kept trying to make sense of the new timeline and how he doesn't seem to have a place in it, and goodness me, you made me wish for taemin's parents to be brutally murdered.

i also liked the ending - the way it wasn't a cop out.

great job, and please write more :)
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