Pt. 2 Of “Maybe Another Failure To Add To Hanbin's Imaginary List of Failure's”

I Might Rip Your Petals [DISCONTINUED]
 
I clear my throat and roll my shoulders back trying to release some of my bodies tension before beginning to freestyle. I knew my flow probably sounded really unsteady and rushed but I have to at least try to pass the audition. For Jiwon and our soon to be romance (it'll happen, damn it).
 
Truth is, I am a big hip-hop fan. But, it doesn't mean I know how to rap. 
 
At all. 
 
So, right now I am taking a huge chance with this audition by a) embarrassing myself, and b) embarrassing myself in front of Jiwon. I mostly rap about my obsession with Jiwon, but of course I didn't mention names or use male pronouns and stick to more gender-neutral terms. 
 
I stop as soon as words cease to pop into my head as they flow out of my mouth. I stand there for a second and open my eyes. I blush in awkwardness as I realize my eyes had been closed the entire time. 
 
When my eyes focus on the mirror behind YG, G-dragon, and CL, I could see that everyone was stood gaping at me; including Jiwon. I duck my head low and tear up a little; was I that bad? Were my lyrics too... personal? Suddenly I hear someone start clapping and I raise my head hastily. I look up to see that everyone is slowly doing the same; even Jiwon. 
 
I feel a small smile reach my face, so I wasn't horrible. I look at the three senior's in front of me to see G-dragon staring with his mouth slightly agape, YG looking at me with a smirk, and CL just nodding her head in what I hope is approval. YG then claps his hands together and points at me. 
 
"Did you make us think you were nervous just to shock us when you began to rap, Hanbin?" He asks with a small smile. My eyes widen slightly and my hands go up a little, in defense. 
 
"W-what? No— no, sir." He just scoffs in what seemed to be disbelief. 
 
"Doesn't matter, kid; you're in."  
 
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Have to fix the spacing again but ayy this is the short finish to the last chapter, I just wanted to tease you guys with the ending hehehe but here is the last part of chapter 4. Chapter 5 coming soon oh and I have to warn you guys before anything that Jiwon is going to get a little scary soon but other than see you beautiful human beings later :)
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ItsjustLlama
#1
Chapter 17: I'll admit your story was always unappreciated by people even though it was a blessing from the lords. Imma miss it but I'm also not as obsessed anymore. I don't know if it comes with age and being distracted with life in general. But Kpop isn't so fun anymore. I do tend to listen every once in a while but having friends that are now beginning to like it just makes me out the fun outta of it. Like I liked it since early 6th grade? Well I'm now about to wrap up 10th grade. So I understand where you're coming from, I barely like any groups anymore but the American in me with sports has always stayed because that will be a lifetime thing so I don't know. I mean I do come and read the fanfics that are worth reading every once in a while whenever I have the chance usually the weekends but like I rather read mangas. In general I understand where you're coming. Its better just admitting it instead of finishing it with no soul. That's honestly what I believe
Yui000
#2
Chapter 11: Thanks for the update, i love this story.
ItsjustLlama
#3
Chapter 15: Hey.... JUST KIDDING, YOU UPDATED YESTERDAY AND I WASN'T HERE!!! AH WHAT IS THIS NONSENSE, I'm always first. Always I repeat ALWAYS stupid school, stupid state testing, stupid memory You come back with my favorite fanfic that reminds me of my except I'm a talentless loser and well I'm not a boy nor am I Korean... I don't even have a dang love life, jisoos. BUT THIS JAEWON HOE IS HERE AND I SHIP #JAEBIN SCREW Y LIKE STEP OUTTA WAY YOU MUSTARD HOT DOG, LOSER BE ROTTING BECAUSE YOU NOW ADMIT YOU FEELINGS..LISTEN HOEBAG, DOUBLEB AIN'T COMPARED TO MY BRO JAEWON WITH HANBEAN DIP, I'M SHIPPING SOMETHING THAT'S NOT EVEN A THING BECAUSE I'M DONE WITH LIFE AHHH WeLl GoOdByE cHiLD fOr NoW
kiddo21 #4
Chapter 15: Yeah!You finally update,authornim.I like hanbin here.He's a bit creepy and funny being jiwons stalker at the beginning but still cute.What is his relationship with jaewon?Is there gonna be a love triangle?Cant wait..Fighting,authornim:)
HildaZ
#5
Chapter 15: hallelujah author nim you finally updated lmao
sugarcoffy
#6
Chapter 15: I'm glad this is updating again!! I really like this story, it's just, it's really interesting to me and im always left wondering what's happening next, each chapter never fails to surprise me and I love it!!
bmagnae
#7
Chapter 15: OMG FINALLY! you don't know how happy I am when I see this story popped up on my subscriptions page T^T
I've been waiting for this story like forever xD
so... eum... I re-read this story from chap 1 cuz I thought maybe I forgot Jaewon has appeared somewhere in the other chapters, but I got nothing and then I remember the Mr.X... please don't say Jaewon is the Mr.X T^T ugh... what's his relationship with Hanbin? please don't be a third wheel Jaewonnie!
please update asap authornim T^T fighting!
larabishay #8
Chapter 11: Please update soon pleaseeee
Simonthova #9
Chapter 12: it is really gooood!