Chapter 4: I loved reading this though <3

Chapter 4: i just finished reading this fic and i thought i should say it's an amazing story ..i really enjoyed reading it thank you..

Chapter 4: I take that back. You do have a fair hand with action scenes. hehe And fluff. Gyah!

I knew Taekwoon was going to follow, and I partially figured both events that would happen next. You gave us a hint of foreshadowing (sort of) with the original scenario that got Hakyeon into trouble, but that was pretty brutal all the same. Can I just gush for a minute about how awesome Taekwoon is, on the one hand, and how ridiculously sweet and tender he is, on the other. And that was another stupidly adorable scene with Ravi and Hyuk sleeping. XD hehe

It was kind of strange seeing the way they all moved into domestic mode so quickly, but their relationship has been nothing but expedited since the beginning so I guess I should have expected that. :/ haha Overall though, well done with completing it and bringing everything together. The car crash thing was a little cliche/overused but it's also convenient and I did like how you gave Taekwoon a job (you even explained how he got his position!).

Also, whatever drug those two are on (because that's gotta be why they were on such a cloud nine in that kiss scene lol), I want some. ;P Anyway. Enough of jesting. I did enjoy the story. The whole thing felt a bit rushed in terms of them falling in love, but the rest of it played out nicely with beautiful descriptions and details. I've presented most of the questions I had and I think that about sums it up. Kudos for completing it and good luck with your future stories!

PS - I hope none of my comments were too critical... >.>

Chapter 3: Erm... It's not that I didn't like the dancing, because trust me, I did, but I was more than a little surprised by it being Taekwoon. O.o

And with that out of the way, this was certainly an interesting chapter with all the butting of heads and such. They're both a pair of prideful, stubborn fools aren't they? I know there's more to Hakyeon's hostility than just because of Taekwoon's hastily spoken words but he's making it damnably difficult to get past that angry outer shell of his. And it makes perfect sense for Taekwoon to follow him regardless, given the dynamic you've established between them.

I did really enjoy that scene with Ken finding Taekwoon and then dolling him up essentially. hehe I'm struggling just a bit with how vested and consumed by Hakyeon's well being Taekwoon is (still considering they've only just met) but it does make for interesting reading, if nothing else. As before, your descriptions and vocabulary are beautiful and a joy to read.

Given how you've set everything up, I'm just a teensy bit curious (that being an understatement hehe) how things are going to resolve themselves. Let's see where this goes!

Chapter 2: You're right that being a dancer suits Hakyeon. He's got the talent for it in general and he's also got the sensuality to pull off this kind as well. hehe Also, that's two times now you've made me laugh out loud. 1 = the frying pan scene in the first chapter. Ridiculously absurd but stupidly funny. 2 = "He was so adorable I wanted to punch him in the face." Bahaha!

I like how you've been establishing the stage names for Leo and N at least. Not sure why Ravi isn't going by his actual name just yet but it's your story! hehe And things are progressing nicely, if fast. Hakyeon and Taekwoon have an interesting dynamic and I can see the latter having this protective streak in him, but his solution to Hakyeon's... um... home was way more than expected. At least you brought up how crazy it sounded since they have known each other for all of two days but yeah. lol Likewise for Taekwoon actively searching for him. >.>

Also, that is ridiculously adorable the way Hakyeon kissed Taekwoon goodnight when he thought the other wasn't actually paying attention. hehe You certainly have a knack for both sensuality and fluff with bits of comedy thrown in here and there as well. The action scenes aren't bad either. Not your strongest point but still good enough to see fairly clearly in my head. ;)

On to the next chapter!

Chapter 1: Holy cow! That was quite an opener. haha I wasn't sure what I was expecting but that wasn't it. lol

I really like how you've established both Hakyeon and Taekwoon as two totally different characters. They are both incredibly unique that there's no confusing them with either and they certainly color the story with their contradicting personalities. Hakyeon has a lot more bravado than I was expecting though Taekwoon's persona fits beautifully. He always seems so competent and ready for just about anything. And the way he handled everything that was thrown at him was admirable, to say the least. If questionable in some respects. >.>

Now you've left me with more questions than answers and I'm trying to puzzle the pieces together in my head about how this is going to go in the end. It's both intriguing and unexpected with a strangely bizarre quality in how things are playing out. But your description and vocabulary are wonderful and refreshing. ^_^ I very much enjoy that aspect for sure. Woot! Also, that memory of Taekwoon bathing his dog when he was younger was just too cute, minus the whole Hakyeon being injured part.

Good job! And on to the next part!

Chapter 4: Waaa~ I just found this story. Neo is my OTP in VIXX, and I enjoy reading this so much. Thank you ^^

Chapter 4: Author-nim new reader and sub here ^^ this story is just awesome woah! Best neo story that i've ever read XD ~ pls write more neo plsplspls kekeke thankyou for writing this story ^^

Waaaah! Its so cute <3 cant wait for an update ^_^