new place ?

love is pain

(minyoung POV)

im smiling to yeonghwa and say goodbye to him .

" chingu-yaaa ! ill keep your bracalet forever and ever ! " yeonghwa looked back and smile back , his eyes was teary and now i feel like want to cry .

"minyoung , lets go " said mr shin and he put his hand on my shoulder .

" dont try to be nice to me . i following you because of what yeonghwa said to me . dont you ever touch me , by the way , im not calling you appa , ill call you mr shin , is that alright ? " i said with no expression on my face . i'll try to be cold to my dad . eventhough my dad look shocked but he forced himself to smile and said okay .

"okey then , lets go now , its about the time . "said mr shin ,

 i just nodded my head and following my dad .

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(minyoung POV)

"ah ! this is not a house , this is mansion ! " i shouted ,

*sooooo big*

"minyoung , lets go in , everyone is waiting for you , ill show your room later but first , you need to know your stepmother and yourstepbrother . " said my dad . i feel uncomfartable whenever to meet the stepmother . she's the reason why my mum suicide .

"okey , ill introduce you , this is your mother i means stepmother , her name is shin insuk . meanwhile this is your 12 stepbrother , "

"hi , im leetuk , im the oldest brother  "

"heechul"

"annyong , im kangin "

"nice to meet you dongsae , my name is yesung " he smile .

"im sungmin"

"hello there , im shindong"

"im eunhyuk and you look cute ^^"

"im donghae ! "

"hi dear , im siwon and nice to meet you dongsae "

"ryeowook"

"kyuhun , im the last sons , eventhough you take my place but hey , its okey "

i just looked at them . im not smiling either laughing . my face has no expression at all .

"can i go to my room ? im tired " i asked the housekeeper .

"ill bring you there" said the housekeeper .

im going upstair without looking at them .

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(mr shin POV)

"jongmal mianei , she dont want to accept us but please help me . give her hapiness and dont ever and ever make her cry , " i said to them .

leetuk come near to me and hugged me and try to comfort . "gwaenchannayo , we will try to make minyung accept  us all "leetuk smile . we will , we PROMISE .

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shinminyoung #1
okay
possible
#2
update!!quickly!just inprove on grammer!!!!!!
shinminyoung #3
niacarnes : haaha , there's no henry in that picture :P
NiaCarnes #4
Aww , the photo !! i cant stand on looking at it ! grr
parkhwanghae #5
chapter 11? that's only about PARK HWANG HAE !?<br />
hurm~ how could you~ huhu~ nvm...<br />
i will do MINYOUNG in my firstfanfics<br />
she always talk and talk with non-stop...<br />
GAAHHH ! XD
parkhwanghae #6
chapter 10? minyoung-ah eat ice-cream , you know what , i imagine like yesung saw an insect at the kitchen... HAHA ! hey~ seems like you copy and paste my idea about eating ice-cream.... HAHA
shinminyoung #7
hyukkie , thanks :D read it :)
minhara
#8
park hwang hae as the dj? LOL. great update there~! XD
Hyukkie_and_me
#9
hi liked your story it was great~!!!!!!!!!