Deceived

Description

This story was inspired by the classic book, "Lord of the Flies," which was authored by William Golding and is now popularized by the book and movie series, "The Hunger Games."  The concept was also done by the famous Japanese novel, "Battle Royale," written by Koushun Takami.

It has a general plot, wherein the characters in the story are faced with a difficult situation that requires them to kill or be killed in order to survive a dystopian environment.  However, I will add my own twists to this story just like how the well-known fanfic, "48 Hours" featuring the boy group EXO was acclaimed.

The story revolves around the Bangtan Boyscouts as idols who were suddenly trapped in a theme park called, "Comical Wonderland" where there are 9 sectors that would separate each land that would feature certain rides, materials, and other important matters.

In the beginning, an announcement was made by a strange and dark voice through the speakers around the park.  He laid out ten simple rules, although they were tough to follow... the boys had no other choice but to fulfill the wishes of the boss.

What could possibly happen to the seven innocent people in a place that would seem amusing but is actually very life-threatening?

*Author's note: The main character in this story is Kim Namjoon.  But, don't worry, everyone will be featured well as much as he will be.

BTS BEGINS...

Foreword

"Well, well, well... " a strong and dense voice echoed from all the empty spaces they saw, "Welcome! To Comical Wonderland!"

It was a voice too deep that it made everyone's hair stand, and feet frozen on the ground.

"What was that?" V asked, "Aren't they supposed to be more friendly?" his mouth was wide open in fear.

The others just had their eyes searching for something that would lead them to the voice's owner with the hint of uneasiness.

"Don't be afraid, for you haven't even played!" the speakers continued to boom a loud voice.

"Can he communicate with us?" Rapmon seemed to notice the strange perfect timing of each sentence the speaker makes.

"Oh, you look pale... is it because of the rides?" The tone changed, it sounded almost like he was mocking the seven boys.

"Ummm... no, we're wondering why we're the only ones here" Suga asked, carelessly.

"Didn't anybody tell you that you have the place all to yourselves?" the announcer asked, in a way that they could almost feel like someone was coming up behind them.

"This doesn't sound good" Jungkook whispered to Rapmon.

The leader felt something wasn't right as soon as he saw the gates open on its own.  It was nearing sundown, and he suspected that this occurrence, was also part of the plan.

"Yes, our PD-nim said so... but we weren't expecting to be totally alone" Namjoon almost felt his throat dry out, "I mean, where's the staff? Shouldn't you at least have some crew around the place?"

"Oh, it's because the entire place was built exclusively for you! Now, let me lay down some rules... which you all must strictly follow" the speakers paused for a while after the unexpected response.

"What is he talking about?" Jimin looked at the others, with his forehead creased, "I don't get it"

They all either shook their heads, shrugged their shoulders, held up their hands to indicate that they "didn't know," or mouthed, "I don't know"

"Listen, because I will not repeat what I have to say right this very moment... " the chilling voice made them pay attention keenly, "There are ten rules, only ten that you have to keep in mind... first, you will be given a maxiumum of six days to fulfill one condition... "

They all exchanged glances after the brief moment of silence, then the speaker continued, "That condition is every person inside this theme park has to die... all except one"

Their minds tried to stop absorbing what was being said, because it didn't sound logical but their curiousity made them even want to listen further.

The voice went on, "Second, before each day ends, one member has to die"

The word suddenly started to sound impulsive and real...

"Third," The announcer deepened his voice, "If the second rule is not taken seriously, then one of you will get shot"

Now, that sounded even more ridiculous to Namjoon but he still kept his ears open.

"No, that's insane... this is impossible, what you're saying isn't true!" V started panting.

"Now, V... calm down" J-Hope held on to his friend's arm.

"No, let go of me!" V yanked his upper limb from Hoseok, "I don't believe it! This guy sounds even crazier than I do!"

"V... don't do this... not now" Rapmon tried to approach his fellow member.

"What in the world are we listening to? It's a speaker for god's sake!" He held on to the strands of his hair, "We don't deserve this! PD-nim said he's giving us some time off from work, not some poor prank"

"Taehyung, stop that" Jimin said, as he went over his side "You're overreacting"

"You call this overreacting?!" V was nearly out of his mind, "This isn't what we asked for! Seriously, you're letting it fool you!" he went over the gate that was closed previously.

His hands gripped the round bars that made up the huge barrier between the gravel path beneath them.

"You're lying! You don't have any right to tell us what to do!" he started shaking the bars back and forth as he screamed.

The gate won't budge, it seemed like it was built to be locked forever.

"Taehyung... " Namjoon slowly sensed something unfortunate about to happen.

"I will not die, you hear me? You son of a--" his words abruptly stopped as he was sent flying by the electrocution sent by the wires on the side that were connected to the gate.

His body landed with an ungodly sound, and he just laid down the ground, still.  Taehyung's eyes were open but there was no sign of his chest moving. No inhaling or exhaling.  They all immediately stepped towards the lying body, while J-Hope knelt by his side.

"V, are you okay? Stay with us, please" Hoseok was almost ready to shed a tear as he reached his hand out.

"J-Hope, don't touch him... " Namjoon warned, "He still has electricity flowing in his body"

Jimin positioned himself near Taehyung's head and looked at his poised eyes, "Hyung, is he... ?"

Namjoon pursed his lips, "I don't know" He wished he really hadn't.

"Fourth rule: Do not try to open the gates, you will be electrocuted" the announcer added.

So, the speaker can hear everything... Namjoon thought.  But can he see what they're doing?

"Why have you only told us that now?" Suga was trying to hold his anger back.

"It's too late" Hoseok told Jimin, "He's not breathing"

"V, yah!... Yah, V!" Jimin pounded his fist on the cemented floor beside Taehyung's left ear.

Hoseok held Jimin in his arms, "It's going to be okay" he told the younger one.

"D*mn it!" Yoongi covered his face with his hands.

"Guys, I think we better listen to him" Jin stated as he stood near the post where a nearby speaker was placed.

Namjoon didn't even want to think about V's immobile stature.  It disturbed him to the point that he had to look away.

"Fifth: A ride may start whenever it may" the unforgivable speaker's voice was nearly killing the members' ears just by laying the rules out, "Sixth: You can operate any ride for as long as you want, provided that someone has to ride along with it"

"How do we know it's not a trap?" Jimin sobbed, as he looked up from Hoseok's shoulders.

The announcer kept going, "Seventh: You can go around but you cannot leave the theme park except for the last person who survived"

"This is inhumane" Suga rubbed his face frustratingly.

"Eighth rule: You cannot destroy the sensors, shooters, and/or speakers.  Ninth rule: No complaining or swearing" The announcer stopped for a while.

And that's when Jimin broke away from Hoseok to stand up, "What? Go ahead, say the tenth" he threatened.

"Jimin... " Jin said his name softly, almost as if he was telling him to keep himself down.

"The last rule is You can kill yourself" the announcer ended with, "So, that's it for today! We hope you have a memorable stay here at Comical Wonderland!"

snowflakedreams
150812 - First chapter of What I Wished For is posted!

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demonicacid
#1
Chapter 5: I had a goosebumps ... I need a moment QAQ
banore #2
Such an interesting concept! <3