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Broken Hearted
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Chapter 4

September 11, 2015. Morning.

Bomi POV

I am enveloped in a fierce and blinding windstorm. Still keeping my eyes shut and my left shoulder covering my nose and mouth, I struggle forward.

One step.

Two steps.

Three steps.

Onward. I am trying my best to keep myself calm. All you have to do is move forward Bomi and you’ll soon see daylight again.

Dirt. Stop it.

Ash. Stop it!

Pulverized concrete. Stop it!!

Cremated alive. STOP IT!!!

I try my best not to think about the South Tower’s implosion and what happened to people trapped inside. I’m failing miserably.

‘Don’t give up, Bomi!’ Dad ?

I thought I heard Dad’s voice. Can’t be. He died when I was 6 years old. He taught me how to play basketball. Whenever I hit the floor hard, he always yelled out: ‘Don’t give up, Bomi!’

I won’t give up, Dad.

One step.

Two steps.

Three steps.

Four steps.

‘…’

After what seems like an eternity, I no longer feel the wind hitting my body. I crack my eyelids open slightly and sunlight shines into my eyes.

‘I’M OUT!!!’ My thought said.

I’m covered from head to toe in a grey, powdery ash. I start wiping my face and patting my head. All around me dazed and shellshocked New Yorkers. We look at each other with an incredulous and horrified expression. The World Trade Center has collapsed! I offer a silent prayer for those trapped in the South Tower.

 

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After patting off the ash to the best of my ability, I try dialing my cellphone again.

*BEEP BEEP BEEP*

I’m ready to throw the phone on the ground now. But what if someone tries to call me later ? I shake off my frustration and look back in the direction of the World Trade Center. What I’m seeing scares the HELL out of me. EVERYTHING is covered in the sickening grey ash. Apocalypse has arrived in the Big Apple. Survivors on the street, yes we’re now survivors are all looking back at the WTC. Some are crying, others are heading back in that direction. What now, Bomi ? I decide to head back. Maybe I can help rescue trapped office workers. At least the North Tower is still standing. Thank God. As I get closer to the sit

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For the next chapter will be the last one. I'll update around this week. Thanks for reading! :)

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ckaz99
#1
Chapter 19: It hurts.. oh I want to cry T.T It's the end and there's our closure... aaahhh that speech, I'm still in pain, but time has passed for them. Those lost, and those left behind, all the more important to take care of one another. ;A; thank you for the work put in writing and completing the story, it was really wow
AegyoPRASH
#2
Chapter 19: Oh my, I’m broken. Reality can hurt us pretty bad sometimes. But I’m happy that at least Bomi and Naeun will take care of each other
AegyoPRASH
#3
Chapter 18: Wow I’ve read it all over again this week, I feel so sorry for Bomi, she has no one now. It breaks my heart how everyone’s affected and vanished somehow.
ckaz99
#4
Chapter 18: We're reaching the end,, ahh I wonder if we'll get the closure but I'm also just, heart squeezing in the grief.. your portrayal is mature and honestly gorgeous in that pain. the day to day.. aahhh. I'm glad you're hoping to finish it, thank u for the update~
ckaz99
#5
Chapter 17: NNOOooo omg! woah! I forgot what this was and now I remember this fic. damn, I thought this story was lost in my thoughts forever, but as I read the words from the beginning, I was like "wouldn't it be familiar if this went like.... hang on.... wait it IS that story! :O"

this update is a lot more crushing for the after moments and finding a job... T.T it hurts, yet the mourning and daily experience of this story captures me, just as it did when I read it back then. The warm memories amidst the depression, the dark heartache of sleep and more sleep.. The memories were really fond and the feelings, oh~ the hug, the teasing, the kiss. Such things to look back on wonderfully. This story, the emotions really fly in heavy and light with this one. Thank you for writing and updating :)
Alaayyssa23 #6
Chapter 17: Can't wait for the next update
Apinkwhore
#7
Chapter 17: Woah an update ((:, thank you for coming back and hopefully won't leave us hanging for too long? Haha.
Anyways i think i need to reread all the chapters since its been a long time since the last update (:.
Apinkwhore
#8
Chapter 16: Please i need you to continue been waiting for this and even msg u back then if u will continue writing the story and u said yes but haven't update anything upto now T_T.
Panda0619
#9
Chapter 15: This is a pretty good story.. will be great if you can update!
NotRong43 #10
Will you ever update this again? :( 9/11 was such a painful day