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( ஐ ) //: WITCHEZ ─ yg entertainment's new girlgroup. APPLY OPEN!
 
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song minah / mina
username. baekyuuun ( app )
position. main vocal & second main dancer
love interest. goo junhoe
status. accepted / pending / rejected / chosen

hello, this is my character. she is the younger sister of song mino, if you want to read more guides, check the cheatsheet and app. hints, ulzzang with a style and a lot of professional pictures are plus points, therefore, no cutesy faces please. come apply and join me in witchez!
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wu ara / a.ra
username. saragm ( app )
position. rapper & dancer
love interest. kim hanbin
status. accepted / pending / rejected / chosen

review pending for now.
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g. haneul / zera
username. everlastskies ( app )
position. main dancer & vocalist
love interest. kim donghyuk
status. accepted / pending / rejected / chosen

hey, ky! thank you so much for applying, at first glance, your app is very detailed and neat. and i love it! I like how unique her name and nicknames are, especially the cinderella one, kkk. about her appearance & style, everything were fine and it got me pretty interested how she is perfectly flawed and all that stuff that she have scars and injury. she is not too flawless, yet not too flawed anyway. i also loved her personality & background, well it took me awhile to read them, but i really loved it. last but not least, i liked her interactions with donghyuk and how she met him. =) they're quite cute. so good job in writing the app, thanks for reminding i haven't put the yet between you and the love interest. i have to say the is if you want to make your character older, she can't be more than 3 years older. thanks for the suggestions / recommendations + support, your character's app is accepted. good luck! ^^
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chu mira / rose
username. mikilove13 ( app )
position. main rapper
love interest. kim jiwon / bobby
status. accepted / pending / rejected / chosen

hi, miki. thank you for being interested for this applyfic + for submitting your application! ^^ First of all, in app, you write her age to be 17. is that her korean age? because her birthdate is on april 12 1998 which means she is still 16 right now. so if you write it in korean age, would you mind changing it into the international one? overall, your character is quite interesting, you write the paragraphs quite well. does she have any media socials? if so, please state them in trivia, if not, please notify me in the comments after you read this review. and her interactions with bobby... XD he is so cute with mira. but too bad she thinks it's onesided love! Overall, I love your application. your character's app is accepted, and good luck!
p.s, mind changing the blog title with the original title at turn in blog? :)
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k. seunghwan / s.one

username. soohunyoung ( app )
position. main rapper
love interest. kim jinhwan
status. accepted / pending / rejected / chosen

hello one! thanks for submitting your app. first of all, i kind of have a hard time finding shinyeong's picture that has white bg like the fcs above and that she has almost too much cute pictures (well, that's kinda unfortunate because i want chic/non-cute fc like i said in cheatsheet). Second, mind changing your app title with the original title ( witchez -- character name ) or smth like that ( check the turn in blog, copy the blog title, fill in your name )? third, dara isn't a rapper so since you're applying as main rapper, choose a rapper twin who's a rapper in reality. and... i'm kind of confused with her personality? can you expand it, so i can understand it? example, check the apps of other applicants above or my app. you also didn't say how she got into yge in background while i told you in the application, write how your character got into yge. i guess you are writing this in complete rush or something? If you have no time yet, you can still do this app another time, deadline is march =) so you can have time to describe everything well.

about idols siblings... yours are unrealistic somehow. seulgi is her sister, and then seungyoon is her brother too because they are twins... in reality, they aren't. this isn't going to be an au story where idols who aren't siblings become siblings. choose one idol sibling. if your idol sibling is jessica, automatically krystal is your sister too because in reality they are siblings. so choose either seulgi / seungyoon as your sibling. in my app, song gunhee from starship is my character's cousin because he is also mino and dana's cousin in reality. dana is mino's sister in reality too. also add in some flaws, anything. like negative traits (acting cool/cold isn't exactly negative) or background, etc.

expand how seunghwan met her friends + how close longer, in order to let me understand, example? apps of other applicants or mine. ^^ lover's personality minimum two paragraphs, and it shall be told not from seunghwan's perspective -- but in general. the about him part, too. how did they met? when did he greet her? you didn't state it. expand this a little bit more, will you? their interactions mininum two para, since the beginning until today. please describe it more + follow the guides. please fix those i stated above. pay attention to my guides. and for now your app is still pending, thanks! ^^

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son jiyeon / joyce
username. waterlily0777 ( app )
position. main dancer & vocalist
love interest. choi junhong
status. accepted / pending / rejected / chosen

hey kim! thank you for submitting your app. when reading at first glance, I have to say it's quite neat and organized. and as soon as i read it carefully i begin liking joyce because of your well-written description about her. i like that she is a surfer *-* very unique and rare for a character. but at the first of your app, there's a slight mess - the line was striking through your character name. please fix it by copying the original source code for that part and then fill the name without erasing entire name. (i.e, character name > characterj nsame > delete the words in front of the bold alphabet {charaj same} > keep deleting until j is in the front & delete the 'ame' word beside s > you're now left with j and s > type in joyce son behind those left alphabets). sorry my explanation really ... .____. hehe. i'm kinda sad you chose someone else as a love interest although i wish you choose ikon members. but it's okay! their is luckily 3 years old, which is the max if you want to make your character older than your love interest. i love the interactions between joyce and zelo so far. good job writing the app, your app is accepted and goodluck!
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cha nami / xia
username. 122496 ( app )
position. second main vocalist
love interest. jung taekwoon
status. accepted / pending / rejected / chosen

not yet reviewed due to my real life calling, but soon will be. thank you for applying, sweetie. <3
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bae soojung
username. naerong ( App )
position. vocalist + dancer
love interest. song yunhyeong
status. accepted / pending / rejected / chosen

review coming soon, admin busy due to real life business. thanks for applying <3 about your love interest, i have to use your backup first because bobby is currently applied by someone else - but if she doesn't get chosen and you are chosen, bobby will be your love interest! ^^
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wonpokemon
#1
Chapter 3: whooo!! if this was real i would be wondering who they were really and if any of the other trainees would finally be debuting. bwhaha.
anyways, good teaser and WINNER playing off coolly~ hahah
iisMoMo #2
Chapter 1: AHH SO MANY APPS ALREADY! i'm still working on mine!
kiyouni
#3
mikilove13 #4
Chapter 2: I fixed my app and added some things to trivia that I forgot to before.
mikilove13 #5
I figured it sounded interesting enough. Here's my app - http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1000197
wonpokemon
#6
Chapter 2: haha yes thank you!
i tried to make her realistic... but then whatever for fictional stuff. lol
and glad she's accepted!!
the is fine. lol luckily i made her younger than that as she would have been a 92er. xD