Cry Boy's Smile

Description

 

 

I like older women,     

 

 

                                                          His sheepish smile

 

 

 

Younger men are frivolous,

 

 

 

                                                           Her stern beliefs

 

Foreword

 

Cry Boy's Smile

Jaejoong/OC

romance; rated: G; 2376 words

 

 

 

 

a/n : this is my first one-shot here. Gah

i hope i did a good job and hope you enjoyed it!

I always appreciate room for improvement so any constructive criticism and the sort are much loved!

 

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this lovely banner from Tiny Tea Cup Shop, thank you for your hard work m(^3^)m

here's the review if you're interested~

 

Andddd...

This is from Forbidden Dreams

and here's the review 

thank you to the lovely ohheyitzkat for reviewing it<3

 

 this one's from World of Literature Review Shop

and here's the review 

that is, if you're interested

thank you so much skyblueroses and Bookworm01 for reviewing it!

 

this is the review from Steph's Book Club

their shop is so cute #justsayin o u o

thannk you so much to the lovely Aerxia for reviewing it~ 

here's the review if you're interested 

 

 

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Alinka #1
Chapter 1: Dear author-nim,

Can I just say that I love your writing style? I always have a soft spot for vignettes and snippets, and this one shot just sums it all, the style of writing I loved the most. Precious moments spaced evenly, providing spaces for readers to breath through , to savor the feeling before continuing their reading to the next part.

I was faced with the same predicament like your main female character, being approached by younger men. Though to say it lightly, none of them stick around once I brushed them off. All the more jaded I turned out to be regarding those younger men. Well, I'm still young and counting so I just shrugged it off.

Back to the story, thanks for sharing this eloquently written story. It was like drinking a hot green tea latte, the warm feeling spread through my body slowly after reading this.

Keep writing and have a great weekend!
wastedlove #2
Chapter 1: ahhh so refreshing ^^ cute.
Jjimjnah #3
this was so cute omg I loved it! ❤️
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