Blinded Flower

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Description

A story where a blind girl, discovers that her fated one was the one she had seen most of her life.

 

Suga, who can only show himself to Jangmi, guided her in her life. 

However, he kept a secret from her.

Yoongi, Jangmi's friend, had a big part in his little secret.

 

Foreword

"Goodbye mom! I'm going to school, have fun in Busan!" you shouted as soon you finished tying your shoes.

"I will Jangmi! Go now or you're going to be late!" your mom shouted back in the kitchen. You walked out your house and walked your way to school.

'Heads up. People are passing by, not much,' you raised up your head as ordered. You smiled just in case someone do pass by.

Walking alone can be lonely, so you tried to describe your surrounding.

 

You could feel the warm wind hitting gently to your face.

You could hear the tree branches hitting each other to make beautiful harmonies.

You can smell the fresh pastry by the nearby bakery that you almost can taste it.

But you tried to imagine it, but you can't.

 


Hello~~ This oneshot is just a oneshot that I may send it to this previous contest I joined. I don't know if I should send this, depends if I can finish this in time. Check out the contest here . I will add more details in the story later, right now you can subscribe till I post the one shot. Tq <3

Also, this is my first time writing a 'you' fanfic and I haven't fully grasp this concept of 2nd POV, so sorry if it lacks of individuality...


CREDITS:

~POSTERS~

invisible

Thank you for the beautiful posters and background! ^^

 

~REVIEWS~

white crown purple diamonds (TopFan):

 All and all, i think this story is heartwarming and cute  and i would reccomend it to many others to read. It's crafty and cute and i would've never expected it to end the way it does. The ending seems a bit sad but, all in all it's a nice story.

 

 

Cherry Blossoms Graphics and Review Shop (jrose94):

82/100Overall, I really enjoyed reading your story. It was cute with just the perfect touch of angst. You did a good job, and I think that if you decide to turn this into a chaptered story, it would be great. You have a very good imagination. :D

 

 

 

Love Port (violetmoons):

89/100 - It's not every day that you come across a story with a girl with disabilities. As the story progresses I can see your creativity just flying out at me! 

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ROS'E Review Shop (Rose_17):

89/100 - The story was confusing but has tons of parts where you could get goosebumps ^^ I love reading it and I would stay subscribed to it and so that it would be easy for me to find it whenever I feel like reading ~

 

 

❋ Sakura Blossoms ❋ - Review and graphic shop (-SakuraBlossoms):

I like the plot and how original it is, the story's plot isn't too cliche and the grammar isn't bad either. I would say the author did a good job overall.

 

∞∞ L.Kim Advertisement & Review Shop ∞∞ (YoseobiesLover):

83/100 - Overall I really liked your story. It was creative and a little sad. There were times that I was confused and didn’t really understand what was going on. 

 

ℝookie ℝeviews | A Review Shop | (rectangular_smile):

108/120 - I really enjoyed this story. It was beautifully written and I found myself scrolling down to read more. I really wanted it to be a chaptered story so I could see a lot of BTS and Jangmi's interaction. They were so cute.

Comments

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nikikookie
#1
Just re-read the story and it's still fascinating to read :3 ♥
nambunnies
#2
Chapter 3: despite the slight grammar errors this was a really good story with a unique-ish plot and characters!! i liked the fluff so much hehehe
ilovesungyeollie
#3
Chapter 3: oh wow it got a bit confusing but it was so cool!!!!
Hirnfresser #4
Chapter 2: I guess they are guardians for blind people or something like that haha
It really got a little confusing here and there but all in all it was really good. Also I wanted to cry but I'm with my familiy so I couldn't xD
xoxooppa
#5
Chapter 1: Confusing sometimes but overall it's good! Are v & suga angels or something?
AlisCookieMonster
#6
Chapter 1: This confused me a bit with the Yoongi and Suga stuff. :S But the story is nice. :-)
enjoythepotato #7
Chapter 1: Nice work! I really liked the story! ☺
Stirfry
#8
ooh sounds good! can't wait to read it! :)