The Prince and the Frog

Description

A JongHo version of the Princess and the Frog.

Hope you like it~

Rina.

Foreword

Once upon a time, there was a land called ‘Alrin’. It was ruled by King Hyukjae and King Donghae who governed their country wisely. They had only one son, Young Prince Jonghyun, a lad of age twenty.

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loveyfan95 #1 May 9, 2014 13:52:05

Chapter 1: cuteeeeeee

mmeeggg #2 Nov 11, 2012 03:10:36

Chapter 1: Love it! Awesome <3

TiggerTaemin #3 Apr 21, 2012 17:52:41

can't you carry this on~ i looovee ittt. so much <3

DonghaeMinho2011 #4 Nov 24, 2011 14:00:28

Funny and Cute. Hey thse are some words that discribe SHINee's little maknae.

inFLAMEd #5 Nov 16, 2011 00:10:28

Wish it's me kekeke

inFLAMEd #6 Nov 16, 2011 00:08:17

Hilarious, warm and fluffy. Just love it<3

bloodelfprincess #7 Nov 2, 2011 14:36:30

That was just too cute! ><

tsundere_zen #8 Oct 28, 2011 11:14:31

I loved the interaction between Jonghyun and Minho! Was funny and yet heart warming! ^^

-Angela-Zhang- #9 Oct 27, 2011 21:00:36

Wow! That was excellent! ^^ 
Not only was it very well written, but the plot was also wonderful :) Sure, it's a take on a known fairy tale, but it was refreshingly unique all the same. 
I love your incorporation of Eunhae in the story :) And Jonghyun made me laugh when he was running away from Minho XD I can totally imagine Prince Jonghyun running to Mummy and Daddy while being chased by a frog XD And there was also something about the scene with frog Minho jumping on Jonghyun's lips for a kiss that also made me laugh XD I'm sure Jonghyun was very happy to see Minho instead of frog Minho ^^ and I love the part with Minho's eyes still looking froggy like XD 
The way that you wrote it; objectively and descriptively was also a very charming feature of this story. Even just referring to Minho as "the angry frog jumping frantically" after Jonghyun added a perspective of comedy to the story. You showed the story, rather than just simply tell it, and that was another engaging aspect of this piece :) 
Oooh!! Jonghyun making seductive eyes at Minho! ^____^ I love to imagine that :) 
 
“If it would make you feel any better, this would be my first kiss as well” put in Minho, trying to comfort him. 
 
“Great, just wonderful! My first kiss is to be with an inexperienced frog” mumbled Jonghyun" 
 
Hehehehehe ^^ This part also made me laugh ^^ I guess Minho isn't quite as bad at kissing as Jonghyun originally thought... :D 
Say, who is Jonghyun's cousin, anyways? ^^ I'm interested to know who Kibum was quite "absorbed" with ^^ 
Once again, wonderful story and well worth several more reads! ^_^ 
Oh, and the way that you ended it, too, with "And they all lived happily ever after" was brilliant ^_^ Simple, but totally appropriate for the story :)