Final.

The First Day of School

My name is Do Kyungsoo.

I'm an upcoming senior at Wen High School.

I'm a pretty average guy.

Minus the fact I know how and when people will die.

When I look at someone, I can sense an aura around them.

A colored outline based on how long they have to live.

Most people around my age are covered in a green hue, which means they have plenty of time left.

A fair amount of them have a yellow-orange like tent to them.

That typically means a car crash or a different tragedy.

The real fun is when the aura slips into the red range.

Every now and then, I'll see someone that's basically a walking stoplight.

Those are the ones that get murdered or suicide.

It sends chills through my body to know they have such limited time left.

The good chills.

It's nice to know their days are slim.

With that in mind, I rush to my first day of school quickly.

I plan to arrive first.

Seeing everyone's colors is like a game to me.

The first classmate that steps in is practically oozing the color red.

I chuckle.

Too bad.

As more and more students walk in, my grin vanishes.

They all had the same intense glow, red.

I finally noticed my blood red reflection in the window near my seat.

I was too shocked to move.

The bell rang.

The teacher stepped inside and locked the door.

His aura was bright green.

 

 

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Lucy682
#1
Chapter 1: .......Dang.
vlackerine
#2
Chapter 1: Ohhhhh...this is so good!!!
I love it!
purplefrost #3
Chapter 1: It gives chills to my whole body! Its intense and Direct to the point I like it
Izandinosaur
#4
Chapter 1: well that escalated pretty quickly.. i liked it!!!
ChocoCaramel #5
Chapter 1: wow its a good one
choitopvip
#6
Chapter 1: Oh god. Oh god. Oh god. The intense level doe.
Fluffydar #7
Chapter 1: My reaction to the end is OH SH*T FREAKING TEACHER!!!!!!
YoonHee_Sterik
#8
Chapter 1: WOAH THAT WAS SO SO GOOD!
Waaa what a pity I guess u wont write a fanfic out of it
MyStarryNight
#9
Chapter 1: THIS WAS SO GOOD!
This whole idea is kind of slow but fast in a way
It was soo epic!!
stardust667 #10
Chapter 1: HOLY THAT WAS SO GOOD