Chapter 1: oh my god this is beautiful. the way you make the whole soulmate thing work is a masterpiece. the gloomy feeling is so radiant even from the moment i started reading and it just matches the sad ending.
it'd be such a waste to make it oneshot.. you need to write a sequel bcs jackson needs to know what happened to mark (okay actually I need to know. lol) and how he'd face the whole situation.
this is a great job!
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