Ice Cream First

Description

Onew confesses his secret to his parents... yeah.

Foreword

This is unedited... but it will be edited later! ^-^ promise!

Editing may commence! ^-^

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xONEWorldx
#1
Chapter 1: Poor Onew!! I love you, Onew! And so does Jonghyun! ^^ <3 <3
Kim_Lee91 #2
Awww. *Give Onew a big tub of Ice Cream* I accept your relationship with Jonghyun. On a side note, I find myself using my bookmark's as a faourite button, and I just slicked it for this one ^_^ I love it!
hae_ki #3
awww... i'm here onew. i'll buy you as many icecreams as you want
SnHiromi #4
It's ok Onew you still have jonghyun by your side :)
taemint0001
#5
Cute!!! awww
StayOnyou
#6
Aigoo~ I know someday they will onew, just live your life happily with jonghyun!<br />
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I love how ice cream could easily distract onew from his feeling!^^
-Angela-Zhang-
#7
I loved it!! :)<br />
Poor Onew... I can totally feel the raw emotions of pain and sadness that he felt at being rejected by his parents. And I think a lot of us can definitely relate to the "writer's breakdown", where he just writes everything out. I really felt sad for him...<br />
But then, Jonghyun came in and that made me so happy!! :) I'm glad that Onew has someone to comfort him- when Jonghyun kissed and comforted Onew, I felt a nice little squeeze of happiness in my stomach:) so cute that Onew has his boyfriend to understand him:)<br />
And the addition of ice cream was so very appropriate- everyones favorite comfort food!! ^^ <br />
I really liked this <3