When The Music End

Description

Every day I pray to god

To let you back to me

Even the beautiful night sky

Seem dull without you here

Not even the bright sun can light up

My world like you did

 

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“Changmin-ah can you promise me that you will live happily get married and so on” Yunho ask softly. He can see the change in his brother eyes.

“Why you keep talking nonsense hyung. It not like you will die today” Changmin reply almost like a whisper but Yunho still catch it. Yunho just smile sadly before change the topic.

Foreword

This is my first fanfic ever.I don't know whether it good or not.I just hope that you all would enjoy reading it. And i'm sorry for my lack of grammar and if there any mistake just tell me.

English is not my first language.

 

Please leave me a comment so that I can improve my writing. Enjoy. ^^

 

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Alexandria_bubble #1
Chapter 3: This is the 5th au I've cried a lot .

It's always unpredictable to loss someone, sometimes you realize them when they are gone.


Thank you for creating this story😊😊🙌💞💕
loveyunjae4ever #2
Chapter 3: I'm speechless and what i do now is crying... Such a beautiful story... It's that jaejoong died? Right?
dbsk5Lover #3
you got the talent.. hope you will write more.. maybe the rated one XD *ert mind*
xzeyrax #4
Chapter 3: This is sad but surprisingly a refreshing story. As others have said, a rare one indeed. I sometimes prefer something like this rather than a cliché one where the story is better with sad ending but it ended with (forced) happy ending. I love stories that are quite similar to what happen in reality than a cliché. Love your story, though it will be better once you get a beta reader ^^ Keep writing!
amykurai #5
Chapter 2: Good story! It's not often I found a story that I like in AFF. This is one of them. Agree with one of the comments that it is rare to see Jaejoong as the one who walk away in Yunjae fanfics. Usually it's the other way round. Hope you'll write more in the future with unusual plots like this.
vyrmag #6
Chapter 2: It was really sad authornim!!But why Jae broke up with him? He didn't love anymore? A sequel would be really good.
Mynonames #7
Chapter 2: Ahhhh...i cry a river ...please make it more chapters
mar1adyve5sa #8
Chapter 2: This is so sad. Never expect jae left yun here.
Thanks for this great story.
mysterycodes #9
Thanks for the comment.You don't know how much I appreciate it.Once again thank you and Happy New Year.Hope 2015 will bring you more happiness and luck.
pagihari #10
Chapter 2: Wow sad but quite a surprise. Usually it's always Yunho who leaves Jaejoong without a second thought, and Jaejoong is always the one who couldn't move on after being left by Yunho. That plot is so common in Yunjae fandom, it becomes cliche. So this is a nice change. I apreciate the author for go against the stream. Good job author-shi.
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