White Christmas Turned Red

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|| Everything's well. Christmas is nearing. One mistake. Everything changes. ||

 

"You really loved me... love-d." It's all in the past for him... "That's all I needed to know. Goodbye Jongin. I hope you have a happy life." I wipe away my tears as I stand up and leave him a kiss goodbye against the door. "Merry Christmas" I softly whisper that I doubt he'd hear.

Foreword

This is my first fic so apologies for errors~ Enjoy! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year :D

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BeRightBaek
Happy Kaisoo Day! :))
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Yasmine_Hashem #1
Chapter 2: I can't stop crying now and it's your fault.
I swear, this is the most amazing and sweet Kaisoo I've ever read since I ever knew Kpop!!
I hate you 'cause I can't stop crying but I love you 'cause this is amazing.
I never really got the rush of emotions that hit someone in proposals but Gosh I couldn't even finish sentence from crying.
Thank you!
< 3 <3 <3
kailovesyousoo #2
Chapter 2: This story is sweet and heartwarming. Just like what not_me said(wrote) I thought Jongin died. You can't blame me though, your title says "White Christmas turned Red" So I thought, you know, the snow was covered with red, which is blood. LOL

But its a good story. Keep writing KaiSoo and I will read them:)))
not_me #3
Chapter 2: I thought Jongin died :3

the comment below, yeah, about the korean phrases, i think you should minimize it (i had gone through that weird stage too) and i think your writing style is great :)
i have no problem with it and just go with it if you're comfortable... each writer has his/her style

HWAITING!!!!!!!!
xiutease #4
Chapter 2: I got a mini heart attack at the end of the first chapter oh my God.

Also my advice is just lay low on the Korean phrases xD like 'Kamsahamnida' because it has an English equivalent. You can still use the honourifics like hyung though because it's p weird to call someone as 'older brother' in plain English lol.

And make sure to start a new paragraph for dialogue! So if Kyungsoo is gonna say something make a new paragraph for it. :)

Nice job though <3

(also we really need to write the bird!au lmfao
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