Epilogue

Winter's Star
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            In the same place where, maybe, a railway made its way through the mountains clogged by evil spirits, that girl doesn’t wait anymore…yet you can only see a boy through the silver trees crying, crying out too loud to not hear him, or too loud to not mind him. No wonder, he loved her a lot, maybe too much.

 

      Author’s note

            I want to tell you one thing: you can protect a person endlessly, but from themselves never.

 

Hey,

I hope you liked my present. :)

Was this story ambiguous? I hope not.

But if it was, please feel free to ask me. ^.^

 

 

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simplyblue_
#1
Chapter 2: This story was ethereal. Its so beautiful. The way you describe this story is so beautiful ;_; tho at first i cant grasp this story well with my limited brain capacity, but at least now i do~~ thank you for writing this ;v; keep on writting beautiful stories such as this in the future~ have a good dayyyyyy
Bookworm01
#2
Chapter 2: Well, it took me a few times to understand the story but I finally did. Wow. It's beautiful. I feel so sorry for V. Sorry, V. Please find comfort in her lifeless body. (LOL. What?) But seriously. Move on. I know you're having a tough time because you love her so much but that is not enough reason to give up on continuing to take lives. (Again, what?)
I don't know what to feel about the ending. It's just...sad. :-( (But it's kinda the girl's fault for not listening to V, I think.)
I wish the story was a bit longer. I couldn't have understood the story had I not reread it for way too many times. With more description, I think I could've understood it at once (like, for example, narrating how Taehyung was a bad spirit—basically show him taking a life so we could understand that he was a bad spirit then show him finding the girl in the mountains). I'm sorry if I'm insulting you. I didn't mean to. I was just- TT^TT Please don't get mad at me.
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Anyway, good job! Thanks for sharing! I appreciate it. :-)
kudofralaxy
#3
Chapter 2: Im sorry but can you explain this story to me again ? I'm a little confused :)