The Winter's Remnants

Description

  



 

Soojung was now alone.

But, she would still keep the memories...

The tears...

And their love.

 



 

 

Foreword


 

"But I don't want to say goodbye."

"Then I'll just say... see you soon, Soojung-ah."

 


 

 

 

 

Author's Note:

Some inspiration derived from here. (I recommend reading this after you read the oneshot.)

 

Just a small one-shot for the mini-contest in this main contest (if that made any sense :P)r i g h t i n t h e f e e l s • a writing contest || Picture Prompt #7: (Xmas Special) [Update]: I actually won the contest! I'm glad that so many people liked this one-shot!

 

Thank you for reading!

-laysbagofchips 


Credits || Poster/Background: mizusora! (isn't it a beauty i'm so in love)

Reviews

Spilled Ink | Review Shop : You show focus and purpose in such a short one-shot, which is really admirable. I wish I could have commented on more, but it's such a short one-shot, and you've done a nice job. I hope I get to read more from you.  ♡

 

❅❄❆Seasons Request Shop❆❄❅ : I could definitely feel the angst while reading and I felt you described everything quite well. Although it may not have been my most favorite story, I thought it was well written and enjoyable.

 

Error Review Shop : Even Though, this is a one-shot, I really liked your story. As mentioned above in the first section, it's the perfect story to read with a cozy fire, hot chocolate and a blanket and then just relax and read the story. That's the image that comes to mind. I love your story and the title. It's a great one-shot, it does end abruptly. But maybe this is the way it should be, because otherwise when you would create more chapters, that feeling that you try to portray could vanish into thin air. You did an amazing job! ;)

 

ღ Unique Angel Request Shop ღ :Your description isn't really much, but it gives the feels for readers to want to read more. It's really organized with the layout that you used to separate the quote and description. Everything is organized in a good way. I really enjoyed your story with the plot. Keep on writing!

 

Mint ßlue Graphics & Review Shop : All in all, a very poignant story. I was impressed by what you managed to do with such a short one­shot. You managed to give the readers a feel for their relationship and form a sort of attachment to the characters. Nicely done!

 

❋ Sakura Blossoms ❋ : I'm not spoiling it, but this short little fanfic is very touching. I would want to read more of it, if there was/is anymore. It almost brings those emotions of despair, and love as well, to your heart. It really is a touching, well written, and thoroughly thought over fanfic. 

 

❂ The Forgotten Phoenix ❂: Review + Advertisement Shop : Your title sounds so mature and fancy. It definitely has an angst feeling to it. Your description doePerfect grammar and perfect vocabulary. I really like how the story is short but still had that strong angst feel to it. You described Soojung's emotions perfectly.

 

♦♦ LOVE YOU TILL THE END ♦♦ REQUEST SHOP! : I like your title because you chose to go with remnants instead of memories which adds a separate more sophisticated feel. The fact that you tied the title into the main story itself is something that I really enjoyed as well. I think that the description of your story was really good. It does an amazing job of stating that the story will be sad, but in a way that makes the reader intrigued not just with the loss the main character will face but how they will be able to cope. I really enjoyed reading your story. Although it is short it still has all the key factors that make up a great story.

 

[STAR] L¡GHT Outlet : I actually read this story with my sister. She ended up crying and now my pillow is soaked. I loved the story a lot. This is the highest review score that I ever gave. My sister literally requested for you to teach her good English. She's just kidding. Probably. The story was really nice :) Excellent work! :D

 

 

 


 

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JaiGuanlin
The Winter's Remnants || HOLY GEEZUS 107 UPVOTES I LOVE ALL OF YEW.

Comments

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Baekhyunprincess
#1
Chapter 1: Aaaaaah this story is so sad and so good!
bellaxo
#2
Chapter 1: I'm a sobbing mess rn
TKeyAlex
#3
Chapter 1: This is the simplest story that can make people cry a river... so saddddd
diajengftr #4
Chapter 1: OMG i almost crying here:( great story authornim!
fresh-salad
#5
Chapter 1: so... the couple sojung saw outside is herself and jongin? it is memory, isn't it? pls tell me!!! :(
pawlinne17
#6
Chapter 1: uwaaah.. nunmul na! ㅠ^ㅠ this is soooo beautiful....
sheedrix_
#7
Chapter 1: Omg this is so beautiful...
suzyelf
#8
This story gave me shiver when I read the poem part! I'm planning to write a half poem/half story too so I'm glad I've stumbled across this! It was actually really nicely done, like one would expect from a bittersweet poetry. :')
Hanna27 #9
great! interesting! awesome!
that I want to say it to your story ^_~