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Fly High ☕ ― A cafe AU // Apply Open# of applicants — 002
updated on — 03/01
author's note — AND I am not dead! So sorry for a long absence as my family had issues and being a junior is a killer ;u; but with prom showing there's less and less work and so I am here! I am again sorry for disappearing and I hope you guys aren't mad orz
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kato haru
by delusionalexotic
face-claim — Won Jonjin
love interest — Lee Seungjun
review — Thank you for being the first one to apply..! And I am so sorry for being late aha...but shall we get on with the review! First I have to admit you made me fall in love with this boy. My goodness I love his personality and his relationship with Seungjun as it is really interesting and I think it would be very fun to write about (and don't worry about the love rival thing I'm sure Woohyun wouldn't mind it as well.) Overall the personality went right to the point so it was easy for me to read, not to mention the scene request about the events. I see nothing wrong with your application! SO once again thank you for applying! uvu
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anh sojoong
by ari-yah
face-claim — Park Hwanhui
love interest — Park Chanyeol
review — First of all thank you for applying! And sorry for a late review but let's get started. May I say that SoJoog is really cute ;u; I can just see Woohyun making her all flustered and stuff but anyway..! What I overall saw was an 'ok' character, her personality was good, long, but explained well that I didn't get bored as I tend to do when I have to read something long so goodjob on that part. Still, as her personality is what I see many times I would like to see something different like you never wrote of what would happen if she gets mad, does she get mad? If she does then how dos she act? Just simple stuff can make a chracter much different.
Other then that, nothing else is the problem but the 'Other' section for the love interest. Just things like his height and trivia where it talks about what he does for a living and stuff. That's about it! Once again thank you for applying! ;u;
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