ed Up Society

Description

What more can I say? Society is so ed up and it ruined our love…

Foreword

Information:

Title: ed Up Society

Length: One-shot

Genre: Angst, Romance and Slice of Life

Rating: PG-13

Forewords (from Donghae's POV):

Society was never nice. It was ed up, judgmental and vile. Everyone was judged for everything they did, for how they looked, and for how they behave in public. To be honest, sometimes I even feel like I’m being watched constantly by society…

Okay, so I know that society judged people for being too ugly, too pretty, too fat or too skinny. But something I didn’t know is that society judged love too. I mean, love is such a sacred topic. Love is rare and precious. It’s hard to come by love and when you do fall in love, just fall hard without any restrictions—that was what I was told since young. So anyway, when I fell in love with my best friend and found out that my best friend was also in love with me too, I was simply overjoyed. I thought that society would accept us, since love is love and that love does not discriminate against race and gender.

But sadly, I was wrong. Even love is not spared and it was the ed up society that tore my love and I apart and ruined our love. you, society.

Characters:

 

Lee Donghae

Kind-hearted but naïve, he thought that society was nice enough not to judge love. But apparently, he was proven wrong when his lover and he were criticized constantly. Although he was sick of all the insults and criticism, Donghae still held on—all because of his one true love, Lee Hyukjae. 

Lee Hyukjae

Equally kind-hearted and loving, he was Donghae’s best friend and lover. Although he knew that society would not be receptive to their love, Hyukjae still persisted. But truth is, deep down, he’s getting really tired of all the hate that they’re receiving…

Disclaimer:

I do not own any of the characters used in this story but I do owe this plot. If there are any stories that is similar to this, it is purely coincidental. Credits for the poster go to timemachine! :D Her posters are all so awesome, so go request from her! ^^

Author’s Note:

Hello :D I have been an Eunhae supporter for quite a while already but this is my first Eunhae story hehe. Truthfully, I was inspired to write this story because really, sometimes I cannot stand how judgmental society is :/ Ok anyway, I really hope this story will receive love from readers! :D Please comment and subscribe, thank you! ^^

Comments

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onesidedlove
#1
@all: Hi guys, thank you for all your lovely comments and I'm honestly so glad that you all enjoyed it! I will work on a sequel if I can think of a suitable plot + have the time okies! <3
SamanthaKH #2
Hmm...I really liked the idea of this one shot! It touches a fairly sensitive topic that's so prevalent in Korean society even today, although hopefully, things will get better there as time goes on. As I read this a report on the news talked about gay rights in California haha :P But, this one shot feels a bit incomplete, almost like a prologue. A sequel would tie it up better ^^
mintykyu
#3
this was really good ^^ nice story! I battle with the same problem~~~my family doesn't think gays should be together either *shoot me*
xXxkangarouxXx
#4
This was really good and true to life. I love it! :D
-OtpimusPrime
#5
I need. To. Kill. Someone.
asdfghjkl, I HATE people hu cnt accept gays.
I mean wtf is wrong wif dem?
Dey love liek normal ppl -.-
Nice job tho!
WAI U NO DO SEQUEL ಠ_ಠ
onesidedlove
#6
@all: Hello! :D I really appreciate all of you who read this oneshot hehe :D I know many of you want a sequel but I'm sorry...as of now, I won't be writing a sequel yet. If I have inspiration for a new plot which sorta fits this, I will write a sequel ok! :D Thanks so much <3
gitonk
#7
please write a sequel!!<br />
i am begging youuu<br />
TT_TT
AminataNSK
#8
I almost cried. Write a sequel!! Why didn't they just move to America where it is accepted a lot? Just sayin' *put my hand up on that one* <br />
<br />
Amazing writer!!<br />
<br />
I hate how hyuk just left him there, hangin'.
_SHINee-Desuka_
#9
You should write a sequel!<br />
I loved it <3