Hello!~

I've posted this before but after re-reading it a few times I decided I wasn't 100% happy with it. I took it down, added a few bits here and there and here is the new, revamped version! I'm still not all that happy with the length of this, but that's something I can work on in the upcoming chapters.
I also never got around to finishing and uploading the second chapter so maybe doing it like this will help me get my into gear and have it posted pretty soon!

Please don't be shy with your comments, let me know what you guys think, good or bad! (Just don't be too mean!)

A big thank you to everyone that reads this and I will try and update this as regularly as I can! 

Thank you! ♥