great story!!

Wow, that was beautiful and I could imagine the dream very lively!!! <3
When I read your story, I had a feeling that I was watching a short cartoon movie which was familiar to me. ^___^


I really liked that the beginning is in happy colors and shows the touching moment when they held hands - so sweet and so happy!
Then the change, when the strong certainty crumbles down, is written with great details and imagination. <3

Another moment which I am very fond of is that Jjong doesn´t see Key´s face clearly, but he knows that it is Key. It creates a really good mysterious space and it is a sign that "the sun will go behind the clouds". :D

I think it is pretty scary when you are scared in your dream, but you see the person, who is with you there, smiling or thinking that everything is alright.

It must have been pretty bad feeling, when his hand left Key´s, when he couldn´t reach him and then Key even didn´t help him. T__T So helpless, confused, scared...no warm feeling left. T_T
Yeah, the path was split, but the worst is that Key said that he didn´t care.
"I need you, but you don´t need me." T__T

Too bad that this dream doesn´t have a good ending. T_T
I love how Key disappeared in a wave oc cherry blossom flowers! So poetic and creative! <3

I really liked your story a lot. ^^

/will let my friend know. ^_^<br />
Glad you liked it!

Thank you! :)

oh so sad *______* but its really nice to read!