Dreams

Dreams

 

I had a dream about you. You were walking and I was walking beside you. You held my hand, so soft and faint. Your hands felt like sandpaper so rough against mine but my heart leapt in my chest with excitement anyway. I was holding hands with you, you were smiling at me. Everything was happy.

I couldn’t see your face all that clearly but I knew it was you. Only you could make me feel this intense feeling of euphoria. Only you that could evoke my feelings of want for someone else. I had never fallen this bad. The sky was bright blue and the clouds were in the shape of hearts and stars, as if they were carved just for us.

Nothing could go wrong. Absolutely nothing. I loved you, you loved me. Nothing would bring us apart.

Then, something happened and the air around us turned black as midnight.

Your hand left mine and I looked at you in confusion. You were still smiling, picking up your pace and leaving me behind. I tried to keep up but every two steps I took, you took five more steps. I reached for your hand but it was impossible; you were escaping me. Tears pricked at the corners of my eyes as I struggled to keep up but … I couldn’t. 

The once pleasant path we were walking upon split in two. Without looking back at me, you strayed off to the one of the left and broke from you small sprint to a run. I tried to run after you but the path shoved me off to the side. The trees bent down and entangled me in their branches, trapping me while I screamed your name hysterically. “Help me! I need you!” I repeated over and over.

You seemed to hear my cries because you turned around. I met your eyes and, with that adorable smile of yours still plastered on your face, you hurried back. The path seemed to like you more than me because it had no problem leading you straight to my cage of wood.

I reached for your hand, hoping you would take it and pull me free. Instead, you looked at me, your smile dropping into an expression of indifference.

“I don’t care.” You muttered. And with that, you disappeared in a wave of cherry blossom flowers, leaving me with the pain of a broken heart and in a cage of darkness.

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kissingyoulove #1
great story!!
Ilonahaku #2
Wow, that was beautiful and I could imagine the dream very lively!!! <3
When I read your story, I had a feeling that I was watching a short cartoon movie which was familiar to me. ^___^


I really liked that the beginning is in happy colors and shows the touching moment when they held hands - so sweet and so happy!
Then the change, when the strong certainty crumbles down, is written with great details and imagination. <3

Another moment which I am very fond of is that Jjong doesn´t see Key´s face clearly, but he knows that it is Key. It creates a really good mysterious space and it is a sign that "the sun will go behind the clouds". :D

I think it is pretty scary when you are scared in your dream, but you see the person, who is with you there, smiling or thinking that everything is alright.

It must have been pretty bad feeling, when his hand left Key´s, when he couldn´t reach him and then Key even didn´t help him. T__T So helpless, confused, scared...no warm feeling left. T_T
Yeah, the path was split, but the worst is that Key said that he didn´t care.
"I need you, but you don´t need me." T__T

Too bad that this dream doesn´t have a good ending. T_T
I love how Key disappeared in a wave oc cherry blossom flowers! So poetic and creative! <3

I really liked your story a lot. ^^
evenherwhisper #3
/will let my friend know. ^_^<br />
Glad you liked it!
evenherwhisper #4
Thank you! :)
SHINeesJojos
#5
oh so sad *______* but its really nice to read!