PARK HYUNMI — HYUNMI — Ami_A_Rin
POSITION: LEAD VOCALIST, MAKNAE
LOVE INTEREST: JJCC'S SANCHEONG
REVIEW (CHAN SISTERS): HI GURL~! Thank you for apply! Now that you edit you app, I think that its perferc, for us ;) We really like your character, so now you only need the aprovation of the co-author.

REVIEW (---AEONIAN9): HELLO, RIN! first of all, thank you for applying! however, i'm sorry to say this but your app has a few noticable errors. i'll just state them down below since i might write too much. my advice to you is just have to learn how to create a believable character that is quite realistic because you can't really improve without effort.
1.  her nickname "hyunnie" can't really be pronoucned as "honey" so fix that or delete that.
2. she is overweight. please make her a bit more skinnier because if Hyunmi debuts with that kind of weight, she will be hated for her weight.
3. Her personality seems too short and too flawless; Hyunmi sounds like a Mary Sue so I suggest you give her more negative traits. She sounds too perfect.
4. her background is too short. elaborate more on her childhood, school life, etc.
5. i think it's quite impossible for her to have so many friends since you stated that she was shy. how the hell can she be friends with Selena Gomez? elaborate more or delete that section.
6. please add on to how she and sancheong interact and how they met because you didn't really elaborated a lot on that section.
7. your  blog title is incorrect, sweety. when you go to the pastebin, you should see the title of the code is "↗character name, persona↖" so you should've titled the blog post "↗park hyunmi, the fairytale princess↖"
STATUS: PENDING