Not As Expected

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As usual, Kyungsoo trace a sidewalk underneath his sneakers shoes, being lighted by street light, walking back home after hang-out with his two best friends, Baekhyun and Chanyeol. He has been accompanied by his shadow behind and sometimes on his side. Today, the road feels so chill and there isn’t any sounds of neither machine nor human steps, excessively looks desolate. This is the start of Kyungsoo's life will changed by someone.

Foreword

this is my first fic :D
hope u all would enjoy it *puppy eyes*
and sorry for any grammatical error bcoz english isn't my first or second language, but my Beta has minimized it,thankseuu sista @mybabybyun88..kkkk~

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thelyrera #1
Chapter 1: What did you do to jongiiiinnnn???? Andwe T___T next time, please write the fluffy one.. Anyway, this is written beautifully, I like it. But I agree with cha and babybyun that you could make it longer.. some situation need to be explained more.. but still, love the way you write! :D write more author-ssi! 화이팅! ^^
mybabybyun88 #2
Chapter 1: I have no words to explain ma feels.....XoX
kkk~ btw do u remember how was my reaction the first time I read it, I was like 'kyaaaakk ><' and honestly sist,I thought u'll add something more but then u decided to leave it like this,and still angsty everywhere....T____T
And I agree with cha_yunjae ssi,u should make it longer,fluffier bcoz kaisoo need it, I don't know why they're always surrounded by gloomy aura but yea... it's proven by ur fic here T______T but after all congrats for ur first writing nee~,good job my sissst :*
jaexyong9597 #3
Chapter 1: My goooossshhhh right when I thought this fic will be fluffy and full of rainbows, you ended it like this..... ;;;_______;;; but then I remember you warned me that this will be angsty...
And I think this is too short, you actually could develop the plot and stretch the story into at least 3 chapter. But you wrote it nicely so keep writing, dearie! :)
Kaikyungsoo #4
Chapter 1: Good story line :
Like this!!!
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