Entry #5 (RainbowDonkeys)
JongKey Writing Contest [Kalafina Edition] - CLOSED
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Title: When Midnight Begins and Ends | Author: RainbowDonkeys | Genre: Angst, Mermaid, Fantasy | Other Pairings: None | Prompt: 15
Description:
No matter how many times Jonghyun was forced to disappear, to return to the "real world", Kibum would always be there, every night, when the clock struck twelve.
A/N:
Thank you for joining.^^ I have to say... I have a weak spot for fantasy/supernatural stories. lol While reading I felt like you could have developed the story a bit more though. For me there is that special spark missing somehow. But its still a good story and well written, :)
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