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YONG JUN AH
Main Vocalist Jung Minhee Tao - None
hyo-jin New Face Pending
25 Dec 1996 Minzy (rejected) Minzy (rejected)
Hello, thank you for applying! First off, Jun Ah is so cute and 4D and I'm sure she'll get along pretty well with my chara-- coughs 4D couple ;) However, I spot a mistake in your twins. I mentioned that your twins should suit your position and Minzy is a dancer of 2NE1 so obviously she can't be your singing nor dancing twin. Please pick a better singer than Minzy since you're the main vocalist and change your dancing twin. Next, I don't really understand your persona. Perhaps bracket an explanation there?
Thank you for including flaws in your personality because I simply can't stand marysues x] ! The rest are fine, just change your twins!
DJ / DO JUNG AE
Main Dancer Jung Minhee Jimin - Sehun
ChunsaAngel21 Female Buddy Pending
29 Jan 1995 Seohyun (rejected) Minzy
Hi Ai, thank you for applying! Firstly, please change your back-up ulzzang because Park Sora is taken. Also change her singing twin because Seohyun is a lead vocalist ^ ^! Thank you, hehe. I don't see any other problems anywhere else so good job! Thank you again for applying, it means a lot!
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RYUNG / JUNG SO RYUNG
Main Dancer Park Hwanhui Love Interest
HunHanFar77 Beauty Ice Pending
7 July 1997 Jessica (rejected) Minah (rejected)
Hello sophie, thank you for applying. However, your app isn't completed. You left "background" blank, which you shouldn't. As I've mentioned in the cheatsheet, your twins need to fit your position and they do not. Please change BOTH your singing twin and dancing twin. For your back up position, there is no such position available so go to the foreword and take a look at the right positions. Those without a "(x)" is available.
Also, the love interest section is not done properly at all. The interactions should be how they act around one another so add more than just a sentence...
Next, your link of your face-claim is not linked to a gallery. It's linked to a layout chapter. So please change that and your face-claim isn't ideal as well but I'll let that slide because she's not extremely cutesie.
K / li jia min
Sub Dancer, Visual Gong Soo ah Mark
jxyous Enigmatic Dancer Pending
7 Dec 1993 Yull Say
still reviewing.
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