Choi Young Do is a fascinating character. Though I am sure I would stay the hell away from such a guy in real life, I kind of see where he is coming from. But he will have to do a lot to earn his redemption. As a man, I feel, Choi Young Do has great potential to grow. Specially when Kim Tan is but a distant memory and he comes into his own. For Kim Tan, that fateful year was about the 'last stance', so he fought for his life, with his life, betting all he had and more, on the line. So naturally, he won. Choi Young Do was just beginning to find himself, so it was not his time and not that much of a life or death situation. He got his heart bruised and he, for the first time, realized that he has a heart. But what happens when he is all grown up. I had read somewhere that your partner's love can not make you complete, only when you are a complete person on your own, can you love your partner completely.

***I intend to add a chapter each month. IT IS FORMATTED LIKE A PAPERBACK. So please bear with me. Constructive criticism and reviews are most welcome.***

Now if only I could get some feedback about the style, the pace and the lucidity of the writing, that would be awesome. I am extremely anxious as this is 1) my first attempt to write fiction ever, of any kind, 2) English is not my first language so there is that extra pressure and 3) I tend to over analyze and ramble a lot. So, please feel free to speak your mind.