prompt || twenty four

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REACTION MEME: Bruised and Broken Version
  • “Woah, when did you get that?”
  • “Who did this to you?”
  • “How many time have I told you to be more careful?”
  • “You’re saying this was an accident?”
  • “What a shiner!”
  • “If you look like this, I’d hate to see the other guy.”
  • “I’m not buying it, you don’t walk into a door and get a bruise like that!”
  • “Does it hurt when I touch it?”
  • “Let me kiss it better.”
  • “If you don’t rest, you won’t heal.”
  • “Another fight?”
  • “What happened to your face?”
  • “I don’t think your arm is meant to bend like that…”
  • “Let’s get you to bed.”
  • “Let’s get you to the hospital.”
  • “Why are you so calm about this?”
  • “You’re bleeding!”
  • “What are friends for, ey?”
  • “So, instead of helping you, they ran off the moment they saw what was happening?”
  • “You need to look where you’re going.”
  • “I’m not accusing anyone, I’m just saying it looks suspicious.”
  • “Do you want to tell me what really happened?”
  • “Don’t move! You’ll faint!”
  • “I’ve got some bandages, wait a sec.”
  • “You’re the clumsiest person I know.”
  • “I won’t let you be on your own, not when you’re like this.”
  • “How could you be so careless?”
  • “I can’t even look at you, you promised not to get into any more fights!”
  • “H-how many of them were there?”

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“When is the last time you ate?”
“Let me get you a glass of water.”
“You can lay down in my bed if you need to.”
“Don’t cry, you’re going to be fine.”
“You’re safe, I’ve got you.”
“You’re fever’s too high, you’re delirious.”
“Sleep it off.”
“Can I get you anything?” 
“Here, vomit in this.”
“You’ve been out for days. I was worried you were dead.”
“When is the last time you slept?”
“How bad does your stomach hurt?”
“How long have you had that cough?”
“Hold on. You’re too sick to go anywhere.”
“I’ll get you a blanket, you’re going to be here for a while.”
“Let’s go home, you’re too sick.”
“I can do that, just go back to bed.”
“Maybe you should go to the doctor.”
“Come on, at least sleep in a bed.”

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Basic Angst Starters

because sometimes what’s left to the imagination is much more terrifying.

“Are you feeling alright? You don’t look it.”
“I just heard something… Something bad…”
“Why didn’t you tell me about this?!”
“What’s all this blood?!”
“Will you tell me what the is going on?”
“Don’t give me that look! It wasn’t my fault!”
“You should probably sit down for this.”
“Please tell me you forgive me!”
“I can’t live without you!”
“Oh god, It was a mistake coming here… I’m sure of it.”
“What the hell happened to you?!”
“Where have you been?! I’ve been waiting for hours!”
“You promised you wouldn’t do this anymore!”
“I knew not to trust you!”
“What’s that in your bag…? Is that–? Tell me it’s not!”
“Is this what a dislocated shoulder feels like?!”
“How could you do this to me?!”
“Wake up! Wake up!!! You’re having a nightmare!”
“I feel weird… what was in that drink…?”
“I don’t want to leave you, but you’re not really giving me another option.”
“Please… you’re scaring me…”
“Ssh, I heard something again. How aren’t you hearing it? It was loud… and getting closer.”
“Are you okay in there? You’ve been so quiet.”
“I came as soon as I could! Did he/she get to you already?”
“I don’t know whether I want to do this. I don’t know whether I CAN do this.”
“Do you remember anything?”
“You have to tell me who did this to you!”
“No, no, I’m not alright. I’m definitely not alright.”
“What’s your ing problem?!”
“Are you crying?”
“You’re freaking me out! Please calm down!”
“I’m leaving. And I’m not intending to come back.”
“You… are dying?”
“Did you drink the whole bottle while tripping? Seriously?”
“Do you have a deathwish or something? Jesus!”
“Ever been held at gunpoint? Want to know what it feels like?”
“Stop screaming! Shh, calm down! You have to keep quiet!”
“When’s the last time you slept?”.

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Scarlet_Sky
#1
Chapter 3: Thanks for sharing this! Needed some inspiration and this is exactly what I was looking for.
RavenUchiha
#2
Chapter 4: Very interesting. I used to write fan fiction stories before I went to college, but after I graduated, my brain pretty much deteriorated. I can't write a story to save my life. I have to start looking for inspiration from places and I decided to look on AFF. This is a pretty cool group. I like most of the ideas on here. Who knows, I might be able to come up with something.
shesamytheu
#3
Chapter 87: Wow the plot is really interesting. Has anyone written a story based on it yet? I'd like to read c:

And tysm for this thread. It's really helpful.
Black_Listed
#4
Chapter 95: For a writer tips, could you do one with verbs of "said"? Do you get me? I think that would be really useful.
LynnseeRae
#5
Chapter 41: Love this collection! So many amazing ideas! Thank you~
fruits
#6
this is really helpful for me
i hope for more updates :)
IRDINAPASTEL
#7
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh, the trailer though!
And I cracked up at the end of the video 'cause it said 'FOR MY TUMBLR FAMILY'
YeojaUiMongsang
#8
Chapter 8: Yo! Hi there. I was just browsing on through and I really like the idea of this plot right here. Like I can already imagine what I would want to do with it and who I’d want to use. Don’t think I’d plan on putting it up anytime soon tho, but definitely want to make a story with this sometime in the future! So would that be cool with you? Because I wanna get your permission to so I can start planning and working on it soon and be ready by the time I do actually wanna post it. If yes, I’ve got a question; is it okay if I change the title? Since I’ve already came up with another one I like more.