Chapter 1: So sad!! :c

Chapter 1: T-T!!! Jonghoon broke Hongki's heart!! that babo!! Although the real stupid is Hongki, he can't just hope for the person he loves to know if he doesn't says it out loud!!

Ahh.. Angsty!! Author is in an emo mood!! Hehehe

NICE!!!

I hate when Hongki sad, hate more when he feels desperate 'cause he doesn't belong to that kind of situation. He deserves happiness 'cause he gives happiness to millions hearts out there with his voice. I'm crying now *sobs*

awww....I hope it will end in different way...<br />
but never mind, you had done a good job!!!

omo... i thought there was going to be a happy ending or something... :(<br />
Wow.. The things you wrote... i almost thought they were from a song... haha^^ your writing is great! i loved it <3<br />
Good luck~

Why you break Jongki apart? I hate you!!! But I like your writing.. I keep wishing that Jonghun breaking up and finally realize that hongki is the one he love. Anyway.. it is great to read the frustrated hongki instead of Jonghun.. <br />
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All and all.. good job to you and please write again.. something aghast but have happy ending is the best for me.. I like ur aghast... ;)

This is really beautiful. I love it a lot!!<br />
But...you do have a few grammatical errors here and there. Is English not your first language?<br />
The way it is written is really nice. I like Hongki's thoughts.<br />
Good job. :)