The lonely boy

Description

Sungjong's parent's had decided to send him to his Aunt and Uncle's mansion over the summer while they take a vacation alone. He meets a mysterious boy there.

Foreword

I honestly don't know how to give this a teaser without kind of ruining the story ;; I'm currently practicing my writing and found out that i'm really good in the first sentence challenges. 

The task this time was: Start with 'There is a legend about the well in the garden' and write for 90 minutes straight. And i'm pretty happy with what i came up with. It's written in a strange style, kind of making it sound like a mix of a fairytale and general writing so i hope that wont annoy anyone ;;

I'd love to get reviews/comments/suggestions as they really motivate me :) Also please excuse my english if you see a mistake, it's not my first language and i'm still learning. Okay i hope you like it! 

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anonyMUSE19 #1
Chapter 1: This is wonderful yet creepy and tragic at some point !
I played IU 's Cruel Fairy Tale ; though I'm not much of her fan just the song
but I am a shipper of MyungJong <3
RainbowFartPower #2
Chapter 2: Please make more these there are just beautiful. I told this story to some kids once and they actually liked it as well. It will be great if it was myungjong as well. Can't wait for it. Fighting!~
AdrianaInspirit
#3
Chapter 2: make it juseyo!!!! >3<
Myungeunsoo
#4
Chapter 2: OMG please make it please. I will be waiting for it. For the pairing, can you make it MyungJong please hee :)
andaeriel #5
Chapter 2: yes pleaaseee.. as long as it's myungjong
lariix #6
Chapter 1: MAKING ME READ THIS AT NIGHT, YOU'RE EVIL haha
Awesome and creepy and I loved it! Do write more of these my friend, please do haha
aozora7 #7
Chapter 1: u know this could be turned into a script of a horror/thriller movie, its sad, heartbreaking, but scary at the same time.
RainbowFartPower #8
Wow beautiful haven't read this kinds of stories in a while ☆〜(ゝ。∂)
Park-Min-Chan
#9
Chapter 1: so heart breaking :( but i liked it so much